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| "Extracurricular Activities" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Title: cool
Reviewed By: meetALEX [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2007 06:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey. this was great. i liked the fact that there was no dialogue. i just had a hard time switching to a hot and heavy ShinKumi so suddenly with the anime and live action as first basis. it was still good though. don't laugh but i didn't appreciate Shinohara joining them in your story :P haha! that's just me of course. well, thanks for sharing your story. good luck and make more ^_^ ja!
| Reviewed By: Aylese1989 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2007 00:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
Good, you need just a little more imagination.
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