| "Destiny's Ploy" Reviews/Comments [ 161 ] |
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2008 17:34 CST
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Ya know this isn't fare...life isn't fare...but I want to read it untill all is well but every time I see that you updated I get nervouse almost like I don't want to read it cause I don't want to feel Kagomes pain or Inuyasha's pain...Its almost to much for me to handal but I keep reading hopeing and hopeing that all will work out well...I can only hope...T-T....Nyuka
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Reviewed By: hopelessromantic_16 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2008 14:19 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg ho messed up is it that right when bankostu made up that lie inuyasha called please update soon
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Reviewed By: jaimed1968 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2008 01:29 CST
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I loved the title of this chapter. Basic 'foot-in-mouth' disease strikes Inuyasha again. Can't he ever catch a break? Sesshomaru is using him, Miroku is using him, Kikyo and Naraku are using him. Kagome is the only one who wants Inuyasha for himself, but he is too foolish to figure it out, or listen to his own heart. Now that her phone is smashed, how is Kagome going to get away from Bankotsu? Will he take her in his arms and try and comfort her after the phone conversation that she just had with Inuyasha? Will Inuyasha figure out where Kagome is, that she's in trouble? What exactly is the plan between Inuyasha and Miroku? Will Kikyo and Naraku get what's coming to them for being such vile people or will they slip through the cracks? What benefits does Sesshomaru get for 'saving' his brother whom he despises? With so many questions, Will 3 chapters be enough to answer them all? Thanks for the update, eagerly awaiting the next 3 chapters.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2008 22:29 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... things are getting complicated... feel bad for kagome... she's just clueless with what's happening around her... and now bankotsu is taking advantage of the situation... what is miroku & inuyasha's plan anyway... what will be inuyasha's reaction after the phone call with kagome... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2008 21:32 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG Inuyasha you jerk!!! how could you!! BAWWWW!!! OMG 3 more..... its sooo sad!!! *sniff* oooo i hope Inuyasha is smart and go find her... and yay that means the next chapter wont be long?? ^^
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Reviewed By: anime-rocks-1010 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2008 21:08 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY GOD!!!! What is Inuyasha really feeling? He says okay to Kikyo and that he loves her then in front of Kagome he despises Kikyo and says he loves KAGOME.... I really can't predict Inuyash's actions!!! anyway.. I hope yoiu update because I was reading this fic even in school (I printed, see the addiction?) and I have to say that you left me hanging! I am an avid fan of your fics and it hurts to see that your fics aren't finished. I hope you finish this!!! Thanks anyway for completing my fanfic reading days... ^_^
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Title: BETTER LATE THAN NEVER
Reviewed By: OLDDOG333 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2008 17:11 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
BETTER LATE THAN NEVER !!!! O WELL SORRY BUT THIS CHAPTER WAS A LITTLE BIT OF A LET DOWN, WITH THE CLIFHANGER FROM LAST TIME I EXPECTED SOMETHING A LITTLE MORE DRAMATIC THAN SANGO GETTING SHOT IN THE LEG!!!! THEN SHOWING NO CONCERN FOR ANY OF THEM HE HAS THEM GO DOWN THE STAIRS UNPROTECTED ,THERE WOULD BE SOMEONE THERE TO KEEP ANYONE FROM ESCAPING THEN SANGO WALKED DOWN THE STEPS SO HE DIDN'T THINK SHE WAS VERY BAD ...THEN TELL THEM TO WAIT IN THE ALLEY SO HE CAN GET IN THE FIGHT INSTEAD OF GETTING THEM TO SAFETY AN SANGO TO A HOSPITAL... ALSO THERE WAS NO INDICATION OF SANGO BEING IN SUCH BAD SHAPE IT JUST SEEMS THAT YOU JUST HACKED OUT THE CHAPTER !!!!SORRY BUT THIS STORY WAS TO GOOD OF A STORY LINE JUST TO DO A HATCHET JOB JUST TO END IT IN 4 CHAPTERS... I'M SORRY IF YOU THINK THIS IS A FLAME IT'S NOT!!!! I ALWAYS LIKE A STORY TO COME TO A GOOD ENDING NOT JUST BE CHOPPED TO END IT....I AM OLDDOG333 KEEPER OF THE DEMON HOUNDS
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Reviewed By: 2qt4uboi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2007 11:01 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG The whole time I was worried to death about Sango's baby! I'm glad she's okay. Inuyasha is being a jerk lately! I love your story update soon!
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Reviewed By: jaimed1968 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2007 05:32 CST
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Wow, a lot of action, mystery, LOVE, and heart break all crammed into a nice little package. This was awesome! Now if only Inuyasha didn't have a horrid break out of 'foot-in-mouth' disease, then he would have kept the girl of his dreams. What a witch Kikyo was for being more concerned about Narkau than Inuyasha, or even Sango for that matter. She deserved to die in that closet for being such a witch. I strongly feel that Inuyasha should now take his brother up on his offer to turn on Naraku. I'm still curious about what Miroku's plan is to get them out of this mess. I don't think that Sango getting shot and finding out that he's soon to be a father were in those plans, but I think that it will be a pretty good incentive. I have really enjoyed this story and look forward to more of your writings. I'll be sad when it ends, but thankful for this wonderful opportunity for your creative genius. Thank you.
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2007 00:23 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*starts crying* 4 more chapters NOOOOOOOO!!!!! why must good things come to a end T-T *sniffs* poor Sango!!!! and OMFG Inuyasha is still clueless..... such a idiot *shakes head* Kikyo... god i hate her!!! Kagome should ram her into a brick wall!!!!!! *grrrs* oooooo who cares about the homework!!! ooo and still i love this story ^^
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2007 21:58 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... lots of stuff going on at the same time... there's miroku & sango's situation... naraku & inuyasha... inuyasha & kikyo's situation... then inuyasha & kagome's problems... with 4 chapters left as you said will there be closure to everything and for everyone?... can't wait... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2007 02:11 CST
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I hope for your sake that you are telling the truth about updating soon, not for the sake of updating soon, but do to the fact that you swore to it, It as tarable thing to sware, esspeshily if your not telling the truth, do not condem your self I emplore you......it would be easier to say it so if you ended up failing it would not harm your marout, trust is a truly easy thing to lose but a next to emposible thing to get back, so I trully hope that you would not sware so lightly, you do not know what the future entails and as such are unable to salitify you promise..................well any ways....................HOW THE HECK COULD YOU DO THAT TO ME DANG IT....................who died...(I *cauph* hope *cauph* it *cauph* was *cauph* Ki *cauph* kyo *cauph* *cauph* *cauph*).....well I guess there alway the chance that some one didn't die but got seriously injurd...........What if if was Sango's baby, I know she was going to abort it any ways but still......well I guess going to the Hospital and getting test on her done would tell Miroku and her family that she WAS pregnate if that was what happened.................If it was Kagome what would Inuyasha do, I don't know if he could hold back he blood lust....o gosh update soon please....Please...Please.............MEAHW
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Reviewed By: OLDDOG333 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2007 21:05 CST
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WELL I'M NOT SURE WHAT'S HAPPENED WITH WITH MY NOTIFIER FOR THIS STORY BUT I KEEP MISSING UPDATES AND I DON'T KNOW WHY!!!!! OWELL ENOUGH OF MY PROBLEMS,,,,WHAT IS YASHA THINKING RUNNING AWAY WITH KIKIBITCHOhehehe O MY THAT WASN'T NICE WAS IT???? ANY SANGO HOW CAN YOU DO THAT THAT'S A BIG DECISION TO MAKE WITH OUT MIROKU!!!! WHAT WILL YASHA SAY WHEN HE FINDS OUT WHERE THEY WERE GOING AN WHY???? NICE EVIL CLIFFY KAGOME JUST HAD TO SE THAT KISS!!!! AND NOW WHO GOT SHOT IN THE CLOSET,,,, HUUUUUM COULD IT BE KAGGS SO YASHA WILL HATE HIMSELF FOR LETTING IT HAPPEN,,,,WILL IT BE SANGO AND THE BABY AND WILL IT GIVE MIROKU A CHANCE TO FIGHT FOR THE LIFE OF THERE UNBORN CHILD OR COULD IT BE KIKIBITCHO DO YASHA CAN FAWN OVER HER MAKING KAGGS FEELING LEFT OUT AND ALONE???? ONLY TIME AND ANOTHER UPDATE WILL TELL.... I Am OLDDOG333 KEEPER OF THE DEMON HOUNDS
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2007 22:03 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice update... who got shot... hope sango keeps the baby... what is the plan miroku spoke with inuyasha... what will happen between kagome and kikyo with inuyasha... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2007 21:00 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love Disturbia!!!! great movie!! but WTF .... OMG.... !!!!!..... ?????....... OMFG WHAT HAPPENED!?! WHO GOT SHOT AT!!????!!! I NEED TO KNOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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