| "Destiny's Ploy" Reviews/Comments [ 161 ] |
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Title: OOOOOOOOPS
Reviewed By: OLDDOG333 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2007 15:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DUE TO TECHNICAL DIFFICULTIES WE WERE UNABLE TO REVUE THE LAST CHAPTER SO WE WILL POST THIS TWICE!!!! GOOD THING KAGGS DIDN'T FALL FOR NARAKUS PLAN. SHE AT LEAST KNOWS WHO HER HEART BELIVE'S.... WILL MAMA TELL HER THE WHOLE STORY???? WILL SHESS BE THE GOOD, BAD OR THE UGLY???? ALTHO PAYOLA KIND OF LEANS TOWARD BAD!!!! SO THINGS COULD GET UGLY FOR THEM!!!! ONLY TIME AND ANOTHER CHAPTER WILL TELL???? I am OLDDOG333 KEEPER OF THE DEMON HOUNDS "O YES DON'T FORGET TO UPDATE SOON"
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Title: great
Reviewed By: codac [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2007 01:17 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great i love it but why does it say completed cause i hope it isnt
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Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2007 17:27 CDT
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update soon poor sango and hopefully kags and inu hook upp XD lol well update soon i luv iy ^-^
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Reviewed By: sexxiigurrll0204 On: October 25, 2007 16:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
damn it. i was 101. man
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Reviewed By: sexxiigurrll0204 On: October 25, 2007 16:17 CDT
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i decided to be the great one and give your 100th review! woohoo! well great story, i'm really liking it. keep up the good work! =]]
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Reviewed By: future author On: October 25, 2007 16:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. i hope that inu can get out so Kag won't be in any more danger. Can't wait to see what happens next. Until the next update, good luck.
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2007 06:39 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
damn i wanted that 100th lol anyways i LOVE IT!!! Kikyo what a bitch!! im like shaking for excitment.... i WANT more!!! and i do miss 'I love the cook, i mean to cook' as well T-T
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2007 01:39 CDT
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I'm numero 98...only two more after me....XD.........Finaly Naraku is going to get what he desurvers...........To be honest Naraku's personality in this story seems to controdict his actions.....well sorta....he is just so confusing....He has helped and tried to kill Inuyasha meny time, he has help Kagome meny times but kill her father, He got Kikyo addicted to drugs and is a terible gang leader............I makes you wander if the the good out ways the bad............wait thought gone he is the worrst and is going to finaly end up in the place he desurves.................FINALY GESSS.................ok update soon please and thankyou...................Nyuka
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2007 21:33 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice update... glad that kagome & inuyasha got away... what will inuyasha do... will he accept sesshomaru's offer or not... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2007 19:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice chap!!! I LOVED IT! i wonder what's ganna happen next?! well PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE!! U ROCK!
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2007 21:28 CDT
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Thats weird the way Kagura was putting it, it sounded like Inuyasha was the ring leader....which isn't true.....and what about Sesshoumaru if he didn't wan't Inuyasha to get it to the wrong crowd then why did he abandon him when he was young....it just not koo.....I mean realy....I just think he wants to see him suffer.....so sad............I'm glad that Kagome wasn't convince by what Naraku what saying that would have been terrable......well I love the update hope ya do it again soon......................Nyuka
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Reviewed By: 2qt4uboi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2007 21:20 CDT
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I love your stories! How do you think up such good stories? I bet if I had a fraction of your creativity my stories would be way better! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2007 05:24 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i was about to die thinking that Kagome was beliving Naraku.... thank god she loves Inuyasha alot more!!!!
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Reviewed By: future author On: October 18, 2007 11:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Phew!! I thought Kag was going to be stupid and keep believing Naraku, but she was stupid for going to his apartment with him. All in all, I think you did a good job with chapter. I'm glad things are clearing up for her. And now we have Sess involved. I can't wait to see what happens next. Until the next update, good luck!!
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Reviewed By: xyanblue On: October 17, 2007 12:24 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow i can't believe that naraku was trying to lie to kagome wel anyway i glad that she didn't believe him well keep up the good work and update soon
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