| "Under the weather" Reviews/Comments [ 62 ] |
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Reviewed By: Fullmetal07 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2007 16:49 CDT
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XD hahaha, i love how she's getting herself drunk and she doesnt even notice. inuyasha is one smart cookie! cant wait for the next chappie!!
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Reviewed By: Fullmetal07 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2007 16:48 CDT
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XD hahaha, i love how she's getting herself drunk ad she doesnt even notice. inuyasha is one smart cookie! cant wait for the next chapter!!
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Reviewed By: Moon_essence1 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2007 09:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lmao oh my gods I LOVE this fanfiction! lol update soon, or no chocolate-covered strawberries for you!
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2007 22:56 CDT
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dear god... Kagome you are such an idiot. i think I would have noticed if I had been drinking more than I put in my freaking glass. However I like wher you're going with this. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: chanda [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2007 21:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, I loved it. That was too funny. I look forward to your update. Chanda
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Reviewed By: ~Alanna On: March 27, 2007 18:07 CDT
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Loves it! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Sweety8587 On: March 27, 2007 03:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hoorah fer updates! *cheers* Nice two chapters (last one too short but i take what i can get ;)) Atta girl Kagome! *cheers her on* Baaaad InuYasha! *waggles a finger* Droppin hints as heavy as anvils an' rilin' Kagome! Drat it all...I had been expectin a lemon in the last chapter! *sighs in regret* Ah well....I guess I can wait more ;) Other than a few grammatical errors here and there, rather well done! Gold star to you :D
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Reviewed By: 1love1 On: March 27, 2007 00:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please write more, its just getting good!!!
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Reviewed By: Punkrock_grl On: March 26, 2007 05:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I really love this story!! I really hope you continue!! Can't wait for an update!! But I have to admit that Inu being 58 yrs old is a little.. uh, weird.. But please continue!!
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2007 00:15 CDT
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Aww, I was ready for a longer chapter. Poor Kagome all ready for love and he doesn't even bat an eye. They'll figure it out sooner or later and I can't wait. See Ya
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Reviewed By: Yashagal [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2007 21:30 CDT
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This is a very good story so far. If you are looking for a beta for grammar, let me know. I would be more than happy to beta such a good story.
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Reviewed By: Inu_Kagome_4Life [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2007 20:51 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol...update soon!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: That was totally cruel but it was awsome!!! ^^
Reviewed By: Halfdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2007 20:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg! that was so funny when she was all mad because she had to type up letters!!!! that was cruel and funny!!!! Please update soon! because this story is my number one!!!!! please update!
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Title: OH MY GOD!!
Reviewed By: ji-an [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2007 03:22 CDT
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SQUEEEE!! You really got me interested. Though, I could say that your grammer needs a little work, there are a few times you have some words missing or jumbled up, but the story was just so provacative, I just couldn't leave it alone! Please right more, now I'm dying to know what happens next!
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Reviewed By: leeluu On: March 23, 2007 13:14 CDT
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Oh yes finally he is going to make her pay woohoo!!!
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