| "Under the weather" Reviews/Comments [ 62 ] |
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Title: jtcl
Reviewed By: jtcl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2007 09:23 CDT
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I like your story I think is good I hope you up date soon on it
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Title: Danny Girl
Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2007 21:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter 5. Wonder how Kagome's going to pay back for breaking Inuyasha's phone....A very dirty mine working here, sorry ;P Anyway can't wait till chapter 6.
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Reviewed By: Fullmetal07 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2007 14:35 CDT
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GHA! dont end it there! XD please hurry with the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2007 07:55 CDT
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i like it!!!!!! i like it a lot!!!! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2007 02:49 CDT
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How evil are you? Dang, just when I was getting into it you snipped me. Love the story already, can't wait for an update to see just what Inuyasha has in mind for Kagome's payment.
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Reviewed By: coykoi On: March 21, 2007 22:59 CDT
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Well damn this is getting good! Hojo is really acting like a pansy. Who calls his mother while engaging in fun activities!
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Reviewed By: Tazwell [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2007 20:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story, I like how it's written :) I can't wait until the next update!
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Reviewed By: leeluu On: March 15, 2007 00:16 CDT
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This is so good! Inuyasha antagonizing Kagome is just way too funny. And it isn't often that Hojo is portrayed with a different character other than being adim-witted idiot.
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Reviewed By: chanda [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2007 17:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, my this is so good. I look forward to your next update. I'll be placing this story in my fav's. Chanda
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Title: Danny Girl
Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2007 11:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Chapter 4 is great, Hojo and his mother are priceless don't ya think? I just imagin the look on Kagome's face when he says he is 58 years old oh,man can't wait till chapter 5.
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Title: God Damn!
Reviewed By: Sweety8587 On: March 14, 2007 10:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
God damn! Now this is one of the best fics that ive read in a passel of moons (basically in a long long time). Its so damned hard trying to find a good fic here, so much gross OOC-ness that drives me batty! *head desk* This is SUCH a refreshing change of pace! Its like a breath of fresh air after being stuck in a car with 5 other people on a hot, humid day! Tis like strikin gold in my mind and its being updated fairly regularly (SCORE!) All that praise done *g* I'd like to get serious. I rather liked the characterization, t'was much very much well done. Perhaps a bit more....tough-ness from InuYasha and a lot more spunkyness from Kagome? That'd be nice ^^ And I do like the pace. Its nice and smooth but the chapters are rather short :'( Cant they be longer? And i do like the way you describe things. Short, crisp....overall, a pleasure to read! Cant you jes TELL that im in love here? *g* Do update REAL soon k? I wait with bated breath!
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Reviewed By: ashfire [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2007 22:13 CDT
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58 what write more plz
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Reviewed By: silver moon dragon (not signed in) On: March 13, 2007 22:04 CDT
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Aww poor kagome :-( she shouldnt let hojo bother her so much that she cant eat right... well i like your story so far :-D and i hope you continue it!!!
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Reviewed By: cone On: March 13, 2007 14:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i thing it will be a great story:D waiting for moooore!!
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Title: Danny Girl
Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2007 08:57 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Chapter 3 was great. I like how she thinks he a workman or something and he thinks she's rich. This story is getting better and better. Thanks for the quick update.
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