| "Caught in the Act" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Title: Hee hee
Reviewed By: Scarred Sword Heart [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2008 17:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked Kenshin and Yahiko's conversation. They seemed like a father and son!
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Title: =)
Reviewed By: axel720 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2007 07:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
This one's still my favourite out of all of your stuff =3
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Reviewed By: ShadowStar666 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2007 13:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
Normally i don't read fics like this but one of my favorite authors recomended it so i said what the hell. I love it. the role that kenshin takes and how grown up yahiko is becoming. very good oneshot. i think i might read your other works. ^_^
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Reviewed By: _luv_naraku_ [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2007 14:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
good job!
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Reviewed By: gure On: March 15, 2007 12:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
That's one hell of a segue for a talk about the birds and the bees. ^_^ This was such an interesting story...from describing the scene from Yahiko's point of view, and his reaction (I loved the protective challenge!), to having all that lead up to a father/son chat with Kenshin. Yeah, it was a lemon, and that was fun to read, but unlike a lot of other lemons, there was so much more here. It was a really creative way to demonstrate their family dynamic. I also liked the wordless exchange between Kenshin and Yahiko that night, and just Yahiko's characterization in general. Very cool. And very nicely done. Oh, and I liked your valentine fic as well! -gure
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Title: axel720
Reviewed By: axel720 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2007 16:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
I loved it! The lemon was hot =p I loved the valentine's fic too, and I'd LOVE to read more! I like it how you use the japanese in there, more authentic, y'know? And the father/son sex talk is always an interesting read XD
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