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Title: Darksaint
Reviewed By: Darksaintofchaos [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2010 06:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh I am praying u come back to update real soon. Lord I nearly freaked out when I noticed majority of ur stories was not on the inugrrrl.net/absolution/ site. Luckily I am fortunate to know u write on Mediaminer.org because I really enjoy reading ur stories and to see them taken down especially when they are not even completed will depress me. Hope school is going well and you are doing okay Your fan Darksaint P.s. Please Please Please update soon. The suspence is killing me lol @.@
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Title: Simply captivated
Reviewed By: QTpie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2008 19:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've never been much for original stories on Media Miner but after thoroughly enjoying your Inu Yasha fanfic, I thought I'd give your other stories a try. Boy am I glad I did. You had me completely engrossed in your plot and even more so in your characters! Amazing writing and plot development as you're kept me constantly wondering what is going to happen next. This story should definitely have more reviews. Please do update when you have the time since your current readers are dieing to know what happens next. Thanks for sharing your wondering piece of work.
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Reviewed By: NTMJ On: April 29, 2008 09:53 CDT
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Hooray I got to read the chap! (Sleeping baby in swing = Mommy can read on the computer). Great chapter as always, Ax! Maybe we'll get another update in another 7 months. (by that time Ruri should be able to entertain herself).
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Reviewed By: Yentruok842 On: January 15, 2008 17:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! Please please PLEASE continue! its an amazing story and i can twait to see what happenes next! ^_^
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: C y a n i d e [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2007 11:34 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really glad that Ryu finally stopped denying the fact that he TOTALLY wants Naomi. < < I just hope it doesn't end up hurting her in the long run... and wow, what a twist to the last chapter. In the beginning of the story, I had my suspicions, but when you made him an agent, I was like, "Well if he's an agent, he can't be the bad guy!" I guess I was wrong? I can't wait to see how this plays out!! :3 Please continue to make more amazing chapters!
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Title: omfg
Reviewed By: Nekoreibaka-not sgined in On: September 17, 2007 00:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
are you fricken serious. I thought it was him, I really did. And then you had to go and make him an agent. And then this. Omfg. You are genious. I really thought it was him, and then it wasn't and now i'm giving myself a fricken "You knew it, and then this amazing writer threw you for a twist, and you changed it! You changed it!" Gosh. Great job. Honestly. You're very talented. I can't wait for an update. And another twist.
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Reviewed By: QBC On: September 15, 2007 16:44 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So at first, I stared at my computer screen in with a tilted head and a confused expression - I was also sorely tempted to scream, "What?" But then I thought about it for a second, and while your ending line makes we think that it is our beloved protragonist, perhaps it is in my desperation that I don't think it is; that is to say, I think that yoru ending line was a heartwrenching cliffhanger, but I think you have something else up your sleeve. You're too creative. But I'm going to take a moment and just say that I was SO HAPPY throughout the first part of this chapter - "Finally!" I kept saying. But the new predicament (and tragic circumstance) between Jen and Alex makes my heart wrench. I look forward to your next installment, whether it may come in a month or more. And I'm happy (and surprised!) that my comment motivated you - Your story and your writing both deserved any praise that I humbly bestowed. QBC
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Reviewed By: NTMJ On: September 13, 2007 17:15 CDT
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What?! What?! What?! You told me it wasn't Ryu. I'm confused. But apart from being confused; great chapter. It seems we've been waiting forever for it. But it was worth the wait.
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Reviewed By: Angel_4_life [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2007 14:28 CDT
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Two words: Oh fuck.
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Reviewed By: QBC On: September 09, 2007 02:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now, I have never reviewed on Mediaminer in my entire career of fanfiction reading - You are the first. Your original plotline has me captured - aside from the vast amount of sex you put into this piece, it is your plotline, the tensions between each characters (especially Ryo and Naomi - GOOD GOD!) that have made this story a special treat for me. This is by far, the most original piece I have ever read (i.e. the most original story, excluding AUs), and I sincerly hope that you continue to write - this story is simply too good to let sit and die. And so, if I haven't alreadly made this clear, I love you story! A masterpiece. QBC
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Reviewed By: NTMJ On: August 11, 2007 07:56 CDT
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You are really are an evil little monkey, aren't you? I think that's pretty much all I can say. Dammit you are evil... (I know you enjoy it I just think you enjoy a little bit too much)
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Title: Jen
Reviewed By: Axel's #1 fan On: July 03, 2007 07:51 CDT
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Good update, girlie...we finally get some focus on Ryu and Naomi (and she freaks out and runs- way to go Ryu). OH! It's crutches not crotches (I giggled at that one, too). But it's all good, you know we love you Ax! So this is what you can do when I'm not distracting you, huh? LOL!
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Reviewed By: inuyasha-obsessed167 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2007 18:32 CDT
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I can't even begin to tell you how much I love this story. It's got suspense, action, romance, angst, and much more. The character development is very intriguing, especially Ryunosuke. I can't wait for future chapters.
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Title: 'Tina
Reviewed By: Angel_4_life [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2007 09:00 CDT
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Dang...I SO did not see that coming with Naomi. What was that picture that the other Sigma guy showed her? I want to know! Well, off to study now! Talk to you later!
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Reviewed By: axel's#1fan On: June 20, 2007 08:09 CDT
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Damn girl! What a cliffie! Great chapter. I giggled a little when you said the baseball team was coming in off the pitch (can't say I've ever heard a ball diamond called a pitch) :) Alex is wigging out- dude's about to lose it. And of course we get nothing useful from the nun other than her screaming about black eyes. Way to get the update out that we've been bugging you for.
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