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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: Nekoreibaka-not sgined in On: May 25, 2007 21:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So far I am loving this. It's starting to make sense. Why that one line of what Ryu's friend said about the he'd be a rapest if he even tried to go after that. lol. I can't beleive the spin you put in there as him being one of the agents. Wow wow wow. I'm glad though, cause I like his character so far. I juss hope he bites the big one and goes for the girl. I'm bad with names, so excuse me if I get them all messed up. Now, To read more!
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Reviewed By: NTJ returned On: May 21, 2007 04:57 CDT
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You updated when I was gone!!! I *so* have a bunch of updates to go through- gah! I liked your half-assed chapter. But of course, I've been deprived of internet for the better part of a week (or it could just be a good chapter.) Yes, you neglected Naomi again but so long as we get something super juicy in the next chapter we're all good.
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Reviewed By: NTJ On: May 05, 2007 09:33 CDT
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Great chap, Ax-chan! I had a totally long review posted and I went to put in the little code thing and my fingers got carried away so I somehow hit the back button (I don't know...) So you get crappy short review because I'm too lazy to retype everything (and I can't even remember what I said in the first place). Loved it! Keep up the great work. and you know I always review (and then go and harrass you elsewhere).
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Reviewed By: lauren_d On: April 27, 2007 19:28 CDT
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I'm hooked, can't wait for another update. :]
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Reviewed By: inuyasha-obsessed167 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2007 15:09 CDT
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onegai write more!! you have such a natural talent for writing. this story is very addicting.
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Reviewed By: Me (duh) On: April 12, 2007 04:53 CDT
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So now our crazy psycho killer is killing nuns and priests? Freak! (As if he wasn't before). Good chapter. We can see how the case is affecting both detectives. Now Alex has Jen there so he'll calm down a bit (at least for a time)but Ryu is still denying Naomi. And what's with the icy tendrils that keep grabbing at him? When you gonna explain that? Overal great chapter, it seemed like you were feeling this one more.
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Reviewed By: NTJ (in all my lazy glory) On: April 07, 2007 08:19 CDT
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Great chap, Ax! Everybody's frustrated in this chapter, I love it. Jen's frustrated, Naomi's frustrated, Ryunosuke's frustrated (and even though it wasn't mentioned I'm sure Alex is, too). I feel bad for Naomi; she's feeling like she has to throw herself at her best friend to get his attention and even then he ignores her. (of course, he'll say it's all for her protection, he's not good enough for her, etc. etc.). We know more about Jen now and we know that she's probably headed to see Alex but we still don't seem to know enough about Ryunosuke. Loved it!
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Reviewed By: Jen (I never sign in) On: April 03, 2007 04:52 CDT
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Hey... now we're getting somewhere interesting. I like this new twist. Things are starting to get interesting... Cant wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Cinner [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2007 23:05 CDT
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Holy crap that was horrible! I mean, how can you get a guy all worked up, and then just stop. Sounds like she knows him a little better than he knows her. Great story, keep writing.
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Reviewed By: you know who On: March 26, 2007 04:53 CDT
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Great two chapters! You're giving us some great background info and still moving the story along. Alex's girlfriend is super pissed- and it's cruel and kinda' funny. I've still got more questions about Ryu...what's his deal? Update when physics isn't making your brain explode! (Ha!)
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Reviewed By: Axel's fangirl On: March 19, 2007 05:18 CDT
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Interesting chapter... so our student body president is our killer? Hmmm... and what story is the last name Arai from? WSWI? You know where to find me if you want to pick my brain some more. :)
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Reviewed By: Jen (nis) On: March 12, 2007 04:53 CDT
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Wow. That's a helluva first chapter. Yea for another Axel story! And you're starting out with the sex right away (go Axel!) I can't wait to read the next chapter.
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