Reviewed By:Ryuuzaki-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2007 07:59 CDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10
Comment/Review: You should be more careful with your spelling. some common words I saw: promice (it should be promise) novis (novice) feild (field) Please be careful with the spelling, but your story is fun to read! ^^
Reviewed By:angel'stear [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2007 12:47 CDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10