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| "Naruto: Pride and Prejudice" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] | Reviewed By: DancingMoonLeaf On: April 08, 2007 01:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow your stories are great, pictures are another story (except the awesome Kyuubi one.) Damn this story is good. I love it can't wait for more.
| Reviewed By: Gaara Freak [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2007 09:15 CDT
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Sweet! I can't wait until you update this. Tis the bomb!
| Reviewed By: Gaara Freak [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2007 09:06 CDT
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SWEET! I can't wait to read the next chapter.
| Reviewed By: Gaara Freak [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2007 20:23 CDT
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Sweet! This is so awesome!
| Reviewed By: Gaara Freak [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2007 20:13 CDT
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This is so awesome!
| Title: To the readers
Reviewed By: Zpan On: March 15, 2007 22:55 CDT
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Hello all -- the author here, just too tired to sign in. To explain why there were comments/complaints about the fic being a big glob of text when it's not now is simple -- I uploaded in the HTML format saved by Microsoft word, assuming that it'd work here like it does at Fanfiction.Net, ect without checking how it looked. Finding out all my nice formatting was some how destroyed in the uploading process, I used the Microsoft Word .doc versions instead. Hopefully it all looks better now... Concerning the short chapters -- seeing as I tend to handwrite everything and I use college ruled paper as well as writing on front and back, its generally rather long before being transcribed, which is when I tend to do my editing. I'm also very big on detail and I've actually gotten a lot of compliments about that. The reason I use notebooks like that is because its easier to lug around then my PC -- I've yet to get a laptop and when I'm stuck babysitting, I doubt I'd lug it with me seeing as my nephews can be rather destructive.
| Reviewed By: zigyy553 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2007 23:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
This CAN go far, but you need to make the chapters longer and take out the useless info. Take it from me because I'm a beta reader. The last reviewer was obviously new here so he must have no idea how things work. You could have made this story 2 chapters long because each chapter is the size of a small one-shot. You would get more reviews adn readers if you did this. I am not intending to criticize you, I'm just giving suggestions.
| Reviewed By: Non-Euclidean Geometeric Shape On: March 14, 2007 18:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
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This is completely unreadable in the format it has been posted in, put in a few paragrahps instead of one big block of text!
| Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2007 09:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmm, this story is off to a good start, and one I look very much forward to continue to read. Still, please do something about the spacing in the story, it would be easier to read that way, ya know? Anyway, I love the story, and it's interesting what you already want to do with the story. So, let's see where you'll take this story, shall we? Please update when you get the chance, and please don't abandon this fic, I am a huge fan of positive Kyuubi fics, especially ones where she is well, a she. Heh. Anyway, Keep writing, and I'll keep reviewing, kk? Later
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