Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2007 16:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Short and sweet. I guess this is credit to your writing, but after looking at the images I realize you really don't need them to see the situation, so good job on that. Though I'm not a big fan of shoujo-ai, I do like a bit of character study. I really like you're approach to Ami and her reaction to Makoto, sorta the ignorant genius response to social situations. A side of her I rarely ever see of her in stories, even ones as short as this. Anyway, nice job, overall well written though it had a few grammar and spelling errors, but nothing too grevious. Keep up the good work.
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