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| "Vessels of Fate; Blood of the Mountains" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: aoi_no_kansei [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2007 12:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
Usagi is definitely not pining for Rei, if it makes you feel any better. ^_^ I try not to mess with the continuity too deeply due to my respect for the work. Takeuchi is a wonder! Now, Minako pining for Rei... that is another story. ^_~
| Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2007 18:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oi, at some point there's going to be a story of yours I don't read. Anyway, as with most of my reviews of your stories, this one isn't much different. I like how you approach the characters... well for the most part. Honestly, your approach on these characters has a touch of feminine finesse I sometimes wished I could convey in my own writing. I do like how you've got Mamoru though, in your other stories he's almost an afterthought at least here there's something between him and Usagi though Usagi now is pining for Rei, but what do you expect for a shoujo-ai story? (or as Mamoru pointed out, Written by a lesbian! Heh, loved that omake). Um, nothing more to say really, just thought I'd pop by and leave you a review.
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