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| "The Disaffected Life" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2007 12:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
A terrifying story of a terrible time. This is a hard thing to write for you I expect, but it is well written already. Please continue to update this story.
| Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2007 14:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn it. You did it to me again. I really like what you did with this story. You did a great job of sorting through what made Haruka... Haruka. Throwing in Yuki into this and knowing that whatever happened to the two of them ended badly (how badly is yet to be seen), but yeah you've done a good job. You give an explanation for where certain quirks in Haruka's personality comes from and simultaneously put it in an Eastern perspective. Dang it, if you keep this up I may very well become a shoujo-ai fan. Grrrr... ;)
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