| "How many kids does it take to make a family?" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Title: Awesome!
Reviewed By: OrlandosLover09 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2007 00:25 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I cant wait for the next chapt!
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Title: eeeeek~
Reviewed By: Kai_Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2007 03:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
cant wait for the next chapter X3. and i hope Hiei will be alright T_T;;;
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Reviewed By: TheBlackRose [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2007 13:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cute story, but I think you could use some work on your writting skills. I like the overall idea, and am curious how you're going to put the Naruto characters in the story. Try putting in more detail, and double spacing between paragraphs. (It was a little difficult for me to read. XP Could just be me though.) Anyway, keep up the good work.
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Title: heyyy~
Reviewed By: Kai_Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2007 01:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
this a great story! its cute and its funny how people want proof that Hiei is pregnant XD anyways, i think making it a cross over with Naruto is cool~~~ annnnd umm...i dont really know about Yu Yu Hakusho and all its popular pairings people like soooo...i say that who ever you want the father of Yukina's baby to be is cool~ lol XD
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