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| "Visions" Reviews/Comments [ 62 ] | | Pages (5): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 ] | Title: great start
Reviewed By: beth1685 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2007 17:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great first chapter. I especially like each of the characters development and can't wait to see how they--and their relationships with each other--evolve. I'm particularly interested in seeing how the case will unfold, and learning more about Kagome's powers, and the effect it has on her life, and how her arrival will effect Sesshoumaru. I thought your writing style was very fluid, clean and effective, and though this is fantasy based, your detailed explanations and matter-of-fact way of story-telling made the situation real and believable (and thankfully not cliche, because some stories I've read are guilty of this). Overall, I can't say enough good things about this chapter. I can't wait to read more to see where you take this.
| Title: FIRST REVIW!!!
Reviewed By: isina1709 On: March 15, 2007 15:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello!! I can' believe I got to write the FIRST review on one of your Fan Fictions!!! (...uhm...it might sound stupid but it's a great deal for me...hehe....ok, I'll stop now..) I'm so happy you're back!! and have fun writing this one!! I'm sure it's going to be beautifull even if you called it an "experiment Fic" I already fell in love with the first chapter.. Update soon!! Love Z.Z.
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