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| "Millenium NIght" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: HentaiVixen [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2007 13:03 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UP DATE SOOOON!!!! I LIKE IT SO FAR SO PLEASE PLEASE UP DATE SOON! ja ne!
| Reviewed By: Daisuke_Shadow_Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2007 23:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
okay, I love the story idea, but it jumps way too fast. If you move it at a more relaxed pace it won't seem so choppy-jump-the-gun. Uhhh... Let's see, Sesshoumaru-sama is rather OoC. Uhhh... Japanese is last name first. Ummm.... when a new person talks, try and separate the paragraph otherwise some readers may get confused. I feel real bad for having such an unhappy review here >.
| Reviewed By: redsnake15 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2007 13:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
great story
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