| "Souls Disappear in the Snow" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Title: -too lazy to log in-
Reviewed By: ShoujoHime On: January 27, 2008 08:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I started reading S4 and then went to your other fics when I ran out of fic to read. You just kind of stopped this one. How come? I noticed your FF account has one more chapter than the one here as well. Do you think you could ever finish this story? The idea is good and original and I'm rather intrigued by it. Not to mention you call it a "deathfic" of sorts and you're really leaving people hanging like this. I'd really like to know what happens.
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Title: ch 6
Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2006 11:24 CDT
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*smiles* I love it more confrontational interaction between Heero and Wu Fei! And dangit I so wanted Wuffles to go back to that room, i wanna know what's in that room. Groe? bodies and gore? nothing? snow? *smiles*
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2006 16:34 CST
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alittle more chapter 3, I can't believe trowa didn't seem to care that Quat fell, then what he said to him when he found out that Quat just cracked under his inattention, staying down in the snow to wallow in the pain of his lover ignoring him... *shakes head* man, you've got a lot of dynamic interactions going on here. Then the voice... I've been in the snow before...endless sheets falling, blankets covering everything leaving only neverending white drifts... *shivers* it was so freakin' quiet it gave me the creeps, one time I walked out through it trying to get to the campus library and when i stopped walkign I realized that I'd walked in a loop, unintentionally heading back to my dorm. There are voice in the snow some times, especially when your sleep deprieved with a really bad cold... I'm not a afraid to admit that I've heard them, chalk it up to being an ill georgia girl completely-I mean completely-out of her element in the snow storm from hell in 2000 in the midwest and getting sick from the crazy cold, delirum- i think they call it-but they were there. *smiles* Anyways i guess i was trying to say that was helacreepy what happen to Wu Fei and I hope that he gets the sight back in his eye soon, but ya know if his eye is moving as it normally would if he could see out of it. Sooo maybe the child he spoke to is actualling using his eye? haha weirdness, it possessed his eye. -----Ch4 hmmm, i wonder if what Wu Fei saw in Duo's eyes was the stircrazy-cabin fever stuff-a flicker of insanity at not being able to get out the way you want to. Or could it be something else? i agree with Wu Fei, Duo would definitely put up quite the fight against the elements, but it seems they are indeed fighting him back tramping down on his strong will with more snow. And it seems that when Heero's with the others he can doze, so why doesn't the baka just let sleep take him while his in their company like the Hunt room and their doing nothing. unless he doesn't get sleep because of nightmares, or glimpses of what happened in the house? keep the revisions coming!
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Title: ch4
Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2006 15:40 CST
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Yea!!!! Reworked, it's even better than before!! "The blonde had a white parka over maybe ten or eleven layers, bulging out ridiculously. He looked like a marshmallow." haha Man he's a cute marshmellow too!!
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2006 00:49 CST
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*chuckles to self* i'm rereading the entire thing and I still love it! so if there's more please post it soon.
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Title: ch2
Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2006 00:05 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Revamp!! I can't believe Heero said that!! ""Would you just go away?" The Japanese youth spat in disgust." DAmn taht hurt and I'm not Duo.
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Reviewed By: sun-falling On: May 02, 2005 21:09 CDT
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This is wonderfully suspenseful and well-written to boot. I am truly intrigued and anxious to see what will happen to the boys next.
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2004 21:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HEY!!!! I love thi story!! IT's very good, oh please continue it!!!??!! I can't wait to see what happens next. (@_@) thank you for sharing your writing talent!
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Reviewed By: Shadow_Kat On: March 01, 2003 22:48 CST
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I really loved the fic but I really hate the fact that it has been 4months since your last post...and your not done!!! PLEASE post soon, I'd like to finish this one up because I want to know who dies! |
Reviewed By: Digimon Dreamer [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2002 23:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, that's all that i can truly saw, this is one awesome piece of work, so wow. I really hope that you update again soon, i love this fanfic. PS. i think you should really push this love triangle thing. WEspecially the 5x2 angle. Heero's an asshole, he always has been. Quatre's an annoying rich boy. Push the interesting people! I hope that i didn't inadvertently deeply make anyone angry by those comments. anyway, i hope you really press forward with this story, ciao! :D |
Reviewed By: ancara_iii On: August 09, 2002 19:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a REALLY great fic so far. Keep those chapters coming! I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. It's very rare to find an author that actually sticks to a fic once they start it, many just loose interest, or stop putting the effort or quality into their work, but I think that you can pull it off. Nice work. :) |
Reviewed By: daz On: July 28, 2002 13:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So far, this story is very interesting and has this essence of mystery about it. I really hope Heero lightens up on Duo soon. Love the perspective from Wufei, it's nice to see him in a story where he isn't just some moronic justice ranting side character. Keep up the writing! :) |
Reviewed By: Digimon Dreamer [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2002 14:31 CDT
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Wow you have got to keep writitng more this is really cool, as long as you don't kill 01 or 03 than this fanfic will remain awesome |
