| "It's A Wonderful Life" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2008 06:03 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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things are getting complicated... what happened to rin... where is she... will kagome be next... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Title: YES WE ARF STILL OUT HERE
Reviewed By: OLDDOG333 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2008 23:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's A Wonderful Life: McDonald's ( Chapter 4 ) Uploaded On: April 18, 2007 19:31 CDT Uploaded On: April 06, 2008 00:49 CDT ( Chapter 5 )!!!! A YEAR !!!! A YEAR !!!! OWELL I'LL TAKE WHATEVER I CAN GET.... PLEASE RETURN THE HOUNDS THERE PACK HAS BEEN WORRIED SICK ABOUT THEM!!!! I GUESS I STILL LIKE THE STORY ANY WAY,,, I HOPE I LIVE LONG ENOUGH TO READ THE END OF IT!!!!hehehe ANY WAY WILL THEY FIND RIN!!!! ONLY TIME AND MORE UPDATES WILL TELL!!!! Sorry but here comes the bad pun "WRITE ON" I just Can't seem to stop doing that..... . I am OLDDOG333 KEEPER OF THE DEMON HOUNDS
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Reviewed By: Chase65 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2007 20:46 CST
Comment/Review:
I wish you the best of luck with everything! I will be here when you are able to get back here!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2007 22:20 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
interesting story...really like it so far... hope inuyasha stays with kagome & shippo... hope they find rin... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Title: really good
Reviewed By: codac [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2007 01:01 CST
Comment/Review:
but im dissapointed it said that weekend and its november but no problem i can wait anyway i love this plot and shippo is so funny he should fall for rin that would be cute
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Reviewed By: the evil fluffy muffin queen [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2007 05:02 CDT
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wow i read and loved the first one and this is just as great. please update though... you left it with a cliffy and i need to know what happens!
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Title: Your fate is up io you
Reviewed By: OLDDOG333 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2007 01:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
BE IT KNOWN THROUGH OUT THE LAND YE HAVE OFFENDED THE LORDS OF THE UNDERWORLD, AFTER WAITING SO LONG FOR THE SEQUEL AND FINDING 4 SHORT CHAPTERS AND NO UPDATES SINCE APRIL IS INTOLERABLE!!!! I HAVE RELEASED THE HOUNDS !!!! I am OLDDOG333 KEEPER OF THE DEMON HOUNDS, WHOSE ONLY PURPOSE IS TO DRIVE SLOW UPDATERS AND SHORT CHAPTER WRITERS BACK TO THE COMPUTER TO UPDATE. They are relentless in there attacks they will bark, growl and nip at your ankles until an update is posted!!!! After which they will transform back in to the cute little YORKIES they usually are and want to play with you for a couple of hours before coming home!!!! OLDDOG333
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Reviewed By: Chase65 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2007 21:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
Loved the 1st & loving the sequel! Naraku needs a real good butt kicking! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Ariel Himura [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2007 23:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
good jpb i cant wait until the next update!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: LadyWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2007 09:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm sorry I'm so late I was sick and on top of that lots of work!_< >_>!! Anyway I love every chapter so far and I really hope naraku gets his! I mean rin is his only little girl he'll kill for her. and kags can say duh things sometimes, she should let inu help her it's the role he wishes to play in their life. till next time ^_^
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Title: Yea Updated
Reviewed By: Fanfactor [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2007 16:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEa u updated!!! Well Hey I can be ur beta reader just send it to me via email. Click on my profile for my email Great job on the story. I love how the whole smoothness from the WTML to this one
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Reviewed By: Vagabond [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2007 16:13 CDT
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I' so glad that I stumbled upon this in the "Recently updated fics" Otherwise it probably would have been another month until I went "Hmmm... I wonder if that sequel was ever posted... WHAT?! OVER 5 CHAPTERS ALREADY?!" O.O I'm loving it so far and I can't wait for more! Keep it up! -VAgabond
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Reviewed By: Inu_Kagome_4Life [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2007 12:38 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
u hve no idea how glad im that u decided to make a squeal!!!! update soon!!!!...i cracked up when shippo was like "where do babies come from" in his "character" voice...i still image it now
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Reviewed By: Tweak [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2007 05:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yay!! its good. i was wondering when u would put this out. I cant wait to read more!!
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