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| "The First, The Second, and Forever After" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Title: Yes, I realize it's been abandoned
Reviewed By: Arilan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2009 21:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Before I start, I know you said you were trying out the writing style and, after a minute, after I got used to it I liked it a lot. It was more poetic, more stream-of-consciousness. I think, if you spend too much of a fic in that style it could get confusing, but it definitely works as a dramatic device. Now then, very nice start. It's a really interesting idea, both the rape-turned-love and the idea of putting the twincest on trial. I really, really wish there was more, but alas that's the pain of the fanfic world. Nothing is ever finished. Too bad. You had me hooked.
| Reviewed By: Fookie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2007 19:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
My lord! This seems like it is going to be so good! I cannot wait to read the rest so you have to update soon. Okay? I'll be waiting~
| Reviewed By: BlackHaru2 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2007 01:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
omg... this is awesome! I love it!!!
| Reviewed By: twistedrainbows [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2007 00:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So far its very interesting. I would love to read the rest.
| Reviewed By: Ariel Himura [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2007 04:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
soo far sounds good...this should be interesting...
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