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| "Together Again" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Reviewed By: Youko's Dish [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2008 16:39 CST
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this I like and would love to read the next chapter.:D
| Reviewed By: KaL KeY [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2007 19:24 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really, really, really, really, really, really, reallly, REALLY like this story!!! please update it! i would love to find out what is going to happen... and just as a sejestion...well...umm...if you want why dont you just put trowa and wufei together...and then...umm...hmm...with serveus (SP) and kuwabara's sister...umm...shizuru i think...together... and i have a slight idea...you might not like that i'm giving it to you...but its just a question/idea...umm...if harry can get pregnate...then whos to say that heero and kurama can't...right? well...what if you make Kurama pregnate since him and kuronue (SP) as so close they seem to be more likely to do something like that...and that could lead to them knowing that harry can...and that may lead to more obtions in the story...or something... sorry if i ofended you in any way by this...its just that it was a question and i dint know how to explain it without giving you an example of it...well...i hope that makes since or helps you in some way... hope to read more soon! love this story! TA TA -KaL KeY
| Reviewed By: shadowdragon85 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2007 17:24 CDT
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*reads through story* WTH! Where's chapter 3????
| Reviewed By: Silvermist1982 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2007 15:18 CDT
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Major flag in the first chapter you're spelling Heero's name wrong. His name is H E E R O not H E R R O. The story is interesting but I get distracted from it by the misspelling of a main character's name. The premise is good, I am wondering how you're going to mesh three vastly different timelines though, that should be interesting.
| Title: Together Again
Reviewed By: TheBetanWerecat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2007 16:46 CDT
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Well, this is interesting. The opening is just that, an opening. Its good enough to hook the attention though and considering how much you're crossing, that's no mean feat. I don't know if you're going to be able to pull this off or if it'll fall flat on its face but you've got to get extra points for managing to make it hold together enough to make me want to see where you go with it.
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