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| "Aiko" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] | Title: good idea, but...
Reviewed By: Little Ant [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2008 14:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is quite interesting, about Naruto being a girl, but she is a bit overpowered, good Mokuton technices, why not, but a better user at Suiton-Jutsus than Zabusa? - No way. Even if she was trained by 2 Sannin, she wouldn't be as good as Kakashi, but now to parts I like: I quite like the idea of Tsunade and Jiraiya being Aikos Parent, and you wrote the story well, though Sasuke seems a bit too weak, and also too stupid. But I guess he hadn't his best friend, to compete with, so he thinks he is the best(though even Sakura would beat him if she wanted to). All in all I like the story, though its too easy for Aiko. update soon, and please update True Hyuuga Genius also
| Reviewed By: negima [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2007 01:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
Dude, I love your work! Even though a few friends don't like a few ideas like Jiraiya not being a pervert. And even though it is a little strange, I have fallen in love with Aiko. Figurtively anyways.
| Reviewed By: BakaHanyouRahvin [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2007 11:52 CDT
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Nice chap. Did Aiko inherit the ability to control wood like the first hokage? I really like how Aiko is turning out. Though, she seems a little like a Mary-Sue, just because she gets everything right away and that she passed the genin test with the highest score. Please update soon!
| Title: sweet
Reviewed By: ayumi&sasukeuchiha On: April 11, 2007 18:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love it! such a cool idea to make naruto a girl and jaraiya and tsunade his parents. look forward to the next chapters. :) :D :) :D :) :D
| Reviewed By: BakaHanyouRahvin [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2007 20:02 CDT
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Nice chapter! I love how she kicked Sasuke's ass in the Genin exam. And it's cool that shes friends with Hinata. Please udpate soon!
| Reviewed By: ElvenNinja [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2007 23:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it, please continue it...wait a sec though, where is Naruto in all of this? Ah well, I guess we'll find out in later chapters eh? *adds to favorites list* Do hurry with the next chapter, I look forward to reading it.
| Title: Cool!
Reviewed By: Akume On: March 22, 2007 14:09 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting storyline. Never read a story where Tsnunade and Jiraiya are Naruto's parents, grandparents yes, but never mother and father. Anyway, thanks so much. I can't wait for the follow-up. Ja ne.
| Reviewed By: BakaHanyouRahvin [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2007 23:07 CDT
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I really enojyed this and I would love it if you continued it. Although, its kind of weird to think of Jiraiya and Tsunade a couple. I mean, they act like a married couple anyway, but its still weird. In a good way. Please update soon!
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