| "Little Sister" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: Ancient Spirit [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2010 22:13 CST
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It's been three years! I think it is time to update already.
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Reviewed By: aisho [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2007 17:38 CST
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I liked this story alot and can't wait to read the next chapter. I hope that you'll finish and post it soon.
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Reviewed By: aisho [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2007 04:54 CST
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Under an hour? Wow, it is quite good. I've only read the prologue so far but I'm looking forward to reading the rest.
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Reviewed By: Ookami Suriya [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2007 15:06 CDT
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brother-sister action...? you are truly a sick and twisted individual..and i love you for it ^^ how old is syaoran btw? PLEASE update sometime soon! - OHS
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Reviewed By: sarimawhite On: September 08, 2007 06:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE it! I hope you post the next chapter soon! More action please!
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Reviewed By: saiba On: August 14, 2007 14:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I loved that even though it is incest i still think its absouloutley cute plz update
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Reviewed By: Kawaii-CherryBlossom-Sakura On: August 04, 2007 17:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story so far :) Really enjoyable to read, and yet very adorable with the whole brother/sister thing. Hope you update soon :)
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Reviewed By: GrayBear32 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2007 11:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved it. what can I say I am a perv hentai but I would like to see more.
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Reviewed By: Dragon_Master333 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2007 15:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Suspence. Nice. This has the basis for a very good fanfiction. I agree with the first comment, though. Very tame for a hentai fic. lmao
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Reviewed By: MertMidnightAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2007 22:07 CDT
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Just thought you might wanna know that I have the mp3 for that song you feature in this fic if you want it. Then you can upload it yourself. Great start by the way. Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: DrakeTheDuelist [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2007 00:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww, that was really sweet. A bit tame for a "hentai" fic, as it is. Also, you don't really say how old Sakura and Syaoran are at this point, or I must've missed it somewhere. I thought Sakura was around 10 or 11, based on the rest of the series when you made mention of Sakura being the Cardcaptor, but she seemed a lot younger than that in the last scene. And all you really said about how old Syaoran is is that he's older than Sakura yet younger than Toya.
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