| "Betrayed" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2010 03:24 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
interesting story... wonder what happens next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: Silver Dog of the Snow [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2008 02:26 CST
Comment/Review:
Hmmm...sounds interesting! Naraku, being Inuyasha's uncle is weird but highly interesting. Please continue and try to review your work to see that you don't confuse words like "coarse" instead of "course". They are commonly mispelled words so I can't say anything on the matter when I mispell my words, often when I type. The writting is good, and I need to know what happens! Overall, please update soon.
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2007 22:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
hahahahahahahah shipporinKIMS11 is ya doom if you dont do some thing soon XD but i like it!!! please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!! and i feel like chocolate pudding....... lol anyways cant wait ^^
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Reviewed By: shipporinKIMS11 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2007 14:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
YOU BETTER NOT KILL INU OFF 'CAUSE YOU'LL MEET YOU'RE DOOM IF YOU DO! that being being said, i like this story and highly 'encourage' you to actually update soon *coughs, mutters something about slow and knife and poison and chocolate puuding*. yeah... just update faster.
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