| "Chinks in the Armor" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: Great story
Reviewed By: Mirena [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2007 15:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
the story is great so far except I think you changed Bulma's friend name from Polly Carbonate to Polly Atomica in the last chapter.
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Reviewed By: Natural Fiber On: August 13, 2007 23:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really great story so far. Can't wait for it to continue.
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: April 10, 2007 23:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
I'm getting into this, keep going.
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Title: great fic
Reviewed By: guyan0/Katie On: March 24, 2007 16:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I tried to review this on fanfiction.net vbut the site was too busy at the time. Anyway I am really enjoying this fic Vegeta and Bulma are very much in charecter and this looks to be a very interesting work of fiction. I can't wait to see where this is going! I notice you haven't had many reviews yet but I assure you they are sure to come in with this fic if you keep too this high standard
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: March 23, 2007 04:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
You ought to turn this into a story then leave it as a one shot. You've got more than enough info here to expand it into something.
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