| "Sex-capades" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: German Milk Maid [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2002 16:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
| Reviewed By: Chrystal Venus On: June 01, 2002 15:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
I am sorry you didnt enjoy it. i liked writing it and i am betting you didnt like it because i cut off before the two women had sex ~grins~ all part of my evil plan. now you will have to tell me if you like the idea and then you will see the rest of that scene in chapter 2 |
Reviewed By: Murdok Dragyn Fyre On: June 01, 2002 15:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a good story, quite creative, but if you ask me, theres room for more, but it does sort of get you thinking of crertain things... so just sit back, relax, and read the bloody story already |
Reviewed By: Anna Banana On: June 01, 2002 23:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kick Butt Man, when is Chapter 2 cumming? |
Reviewed By: NeoRamasay On: June 01, 2002 23:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
heh, good story.. cant wait for chapter two, only one thing.. do boa constrictors really have fangs? i didnt think so... oh well.. minor detail ;) spelling and grammer was a 6 cause i had to go back and read a lot of sentences over again cause they were really confusing the first time through, lots of out of place commas... |
Reviewed By: Chrystal Venus On: June 01, 2002 23:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
All snakes have fangs. i know a boa has fangs because my boyfriend has a pet boa, and lets just say she doesnt like me all over her man lol
As for my spelling i did spell check three times so bite me, and anyway the only reason why you dont understand is you are a man and therefore incapable :P |
