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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2007 14:24 CDT
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naraku is not the only 'fly in the ointment' i take it. why in the world would someone want to reanimate kikyo? without kagome there to soak in soul sucking herbs they won't be able to do and adequate job. let's hope it will be a better, nicer version. i guess it has to be investigated though *shrugs* ... ~ a pleasure, ginny
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2007 03:39 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice update... at least inuyasha & kagome talked... hope they stay together... wonder what happens next... what's with the soul collectors... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: Kedaku On: October 12, 2007 01:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gah! What the hell was that?! Just kidding. Once again when all seemed to be getting better you've added another twist to things. I wonder what crawled up Inu's ass this time, telling Kagome that she didn't belong in his time. She should've made him sit for that. Oh well, I'm sure he has his reasons for saying that even if he was a bit too harsh in doing so. It's good to see that Sango is slowly getting better too. I'm sure it'll only be a matter of time before Miroku tries to stroke her butt again lol. Anywho, great chapter yet again. I'll see you in the review for the new chapter. See ya! -Kedaku ^_~
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Reviewed By: Kedaku On: October 12, 2007 00:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter was sad, but it was great. The way you portrayed the feelings of Sango and the others was dead on in terms of how they would have dealt with it if it had actually happened like that in the series. It was nice to see that he got a proper burial though. I'm totally out of things to say on this chapter, so I'll just end things by saying great chapter, I'll see you in the next review! -Kedaku ^_~
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Reviewed By: Kedaku On: October 12, 2007 00:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Blinks* You killed Kohaku? Damn you're evil, lol. Sorry I haven't reviewed in so long, but I'm back now and am catching up. I loved this chapter, especially with Inu watching Kagome sleep. It was sweet but not sickeningly so. Inu and Co. need to hurry up and kill Naraku and Hakudoshi in a serious way. The jury is still out on Kagura for some strange reason though...don't ask. Anywho great chapter, I'm off to read the other chapters. See ya in the next review! -Kedaku ^_~
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Reviewed By: beccansnc [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2007 21:26 CDT
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I love your story. Can't wait for the next chapter. ^^
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2007 01:46 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... hope inuyasha & kagome settle things... and get together... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2007 07:10 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ofc Inuyasha will be back within a day or 2?? anyways ooooo i LOVE IT!!! and mystery person!!
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2007 02:33 CDT
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As usual, misunderstandings on both sides. sigh. Would be nice if they'd TALK, instead of 'conclusion jumping'. IY seemed a bit overreactive, though, for someone who secretly doesn't want her gone. I'm sure you'll work it all out though. No worries.
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2007 02:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent chapter. The characters seem to act pretty much like they do in the series, but with more interesting events. I mean to say that they are more in character than most fanfic authors bother with. I look forward to seeing where you take this.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu ~ on the other computer & forgot my password On: September 12, 2007 02:05 CDT
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i can see yasha's point of view... about everything. she was a bit over dramatic about the whole school thing, yes i can see kagome's viewpoint also. one of the biggest adolescent hangups is about being accepted and fitting in. instead of always knocking heads they should realize they have the same feelings and insecurities about acceptance and self esteem... a common ground. . . oh yes, what exactly were kikyo's motives? . . . good story, many valid points made as far as the kotodama no nenju (beads of subjugation) and her overuse of "osuwari" (sit). nicely written. ~ thank you, ginny
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2007 16:37 CDT
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Wow. Painful and powerful. Love that Sango is able to see past this, shows her fighting heritage. Glad to see Miroku supporting her, devoted. This was very well written, really affected the emotions. Wonderful.
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2007 03:44 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*starts to ball eyes out* Kohaku!!!!!
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Reviewed By: sufferingkagome [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2007 01:40 CDT
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love it can't wait for the next chapter
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Reviewed By: Kedaku On: July 24, 2007 01:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Blinks* What the hell is up with Inu now? He was so happy that Kagome was awake and now he's acting all distant and cold. Don't tell me he's still hung up on Kikyo. She already died what 3 times? Damn, get over it already Inu lol. I'm happy to see that Kagome is doing much better. Hopefully now she can figure out what's bitng Inuyasha in the ass all of a sudden and pull him out of it. Hehe poor Shippo, always getting beat on by Inu, although he does bring it upon himself for making fun of Inu all the time. Anywho, another great chapter down. I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter. Keep up the great work. See ya! -Kedaku ^_~
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