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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu ~ on the other computer & forgot my password On: September 12, 2007 02:05 CDT
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i can see yasha's point of view... about everything. she was a bit over dramatic about the whole school thing, yes i can see kagome's viewpoint also. one of the biggest adolescent hangups is about being accepted and fitting in. instead of always knocking heads they should realize they have the same feelings and insecurities about acceptance and self esteem... a common ground. . . oh yes, what exactly were kikyo's motives? . . . good story, many valid points made as far as the kotodama no nenju (beads of subjugation) and her overuse of "osuwari" (sit). nicely written. ~ thank you, ginny
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2007 16:37 CDT
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Wow. Painful and powerful. Love that Sango is able to see past this, shows her fighting heritage. Glad to see Miroku supporting her, devoted. This was very well written, really affected the emotions. Wonderful.
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2007 03:44 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*starts to ball eyes out* Kohaku!!!!!
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Reviewed By: sufferingkagome [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2007 01:40 CDT
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love it can't wait for the next chapter
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Reviewed By: Kedaku On: July 24, 2007 01:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Blinks* What the hell is up with Inu now? He was so happy that Kagome was awake and now he's acting all distant and cold. Don't tell me he's still hung up on Kikyo. She already died what 3 times? Damn, get over it already Inu lol. I'm happy to see that Kagome is doing much better. Hopefully now she can figure out what's bitng Inuyasha in the ass all of a sudden and pull him out of it. Hehe poor Shippo, always getting beat on by Inu, although he does bring it upon himself for making fun of Inu all the time. Anywho, another great chapter down. I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter. Keep up the great work. See ya! -Kedaku ^_~
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Reviewed By: Kedaku On: July 24, 2007 00:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Glomps* Hey, another chapter of What Now is completed! It's good to see that Kagome has finally roused from her slumber. It was pitiful to see Inu like that. Oh, and nice touch with Miroku groping Sango. You really know how to take a serious situation and inject a little humor to lighten the mood at just the right time. It was cute to see Inu getting jealous over Hojo, that sexy growl of his, it's every fangirl or in some cases fanboy's dream. I had to laugh at the end when Kagome finally told Inu to sit though, I can just hear how Inu's laugh must have sounded at that moment. I'm out of things to say for this chapter. I think i covered them all. Once again, great fic. I'm off to read the next chapter, so until the next review. See ya! -Kedaku ^_~
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Reviewed By: miley [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2007 17:45 CDT
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that was so cute!the story is a good one.update soon.
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2007 04:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWWWW YES!!! Kikyo is gone for good!!! (i hope) things are back!!! wooooo!!!! anither chapter wooo!!! *jumps up and down* update soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: Kedaku On: April 05, 2007 00:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Jumps in the air* Hehe, another chapter down. I was kind sorry to see Kikiyo go like that. I mean, at Naraku's hands? Ouch. And what of Kagome? I'm beginning to wonder if when Kikyo died and her soul(s) left her body, that since she still had a bit of Kagome's soul within her if that was what caused Kagome to pass out like that. Maybe not, just a bit of randomness on my end lol. Again the reviews are 10s across the board. I don't think I saw any mistakes whatsoever. So again, great chappy, great fic. I'm looking forward to the next installment. *Gives you a plushie of Inu holding his Tetsuaiga* for a job well done. See ya! -Kedaku ^_~
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Reviewed By: Kedaku On: April 05, 2007 00:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ack! Evil cliffy! Great chapter. I feel sorry for Kagome. On top of the homework, now she has Hojo trying to put the moves on her? And poor Inu, he still can't decide between Kagome and Kikiyo. Oh well, I'm sure things will get cleared up in future chapters. As always the ratings havent changed much. I did notice one mistake but I already told you about it. Also, I see that half of the story is in bold, hehe. oh well, I don't mind. Well, like I said great chappy, can't wait to read more. Update when ya can. See ya! -Kedaku ^_~
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2007 05:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hahaha i like the last part ^-^ pissa gooo Shippo!!!!! and YES KIKYO IS GONE!!!! *jumps around the room getting strange looks from 2 brothers* sooo happy ^.^ please dont be long!!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2007 23:46 CDT
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oopss i mean as in i 'wish' my mum was like Kagome's mum lol anyways UPDATE PLEASE T-T
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2007 06:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMFG ITS THAT BITCH!!! awwwww Kikyo is such a lil shit!!! sorry abit upset :P but awww i miss my mum was like Kagome's mum *sigh* all well :P PLEASE keep going! i cant believe you left it on that kind of a hangger!!!!!!!!!!!! anyways im gunna add you to my favs so i dont miss a update ^-^ plus I LOVE THIS STORY!!!! PLEASE dont get too long
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Reviewed By: Kedaku On: March 26, 2007 03:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Glomps* Ack! I should've known it was her. Why do I get the feeling that Inu might have second thoughts about killing her? Quite a bit of Kagome angst, which is always good. I know, we've been through this before. I need professional help lol. And poor Shippo, getting tossed out of the well like that, it was just mean. And Kaede...Inu is right, she is a hag for taknig her time. Old or not, she should've shuffled faster! lol. Anyway onto the ratings. 10s across the board. I didn't catch any mistakes this time. So great chapter, and great fic. I'm looking forward to the next installment. Talk to ya later. See ya! -Kedaku ^_~
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Reviewed By: Kedaku On: March 26, 2007 02:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Pounces* Hey, it's me again. Great first chapter on your new story. I'm liking it so far. It sucks that Inu and Kagome are stuck in their own time periods. But, I'm sure whoever it was that did this is gonna pay big time. I laughed so hard when I read the part about Inu being a curious puppy I fell off my chair, waking up the neighborhood I'm sure lol. Oh well, onto the ratings. 10s almost across the board, except for a few spelling mistakes I caught. I had to deduct a point for that. Still, 49 out of a possible 50 isn't bad at all. I doubt that I'd do nearly as well lol. Great job so far on the fic. I'm off to read the second chapter. See ya! -Kedaku ^_~
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