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Title: Ekaterina1313
Reviewed By: Ekaterina1313 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2012 21:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Glad to see the loving Zaraki back to his wife and them trying to escape. i almost had a heart attack when i saw that a new chapter was posted, that i dropped everything and began to read. i dnt know how you do it but you keep making of lust for more of this story. keep writing and much love Ekaterina1313 |
Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2012 00:42 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
What the heck? Man, the suspense is killing me here. What the heck happened outside of Ran's room? Either way, this is beginning to reach a final climax though I'm not sure exactly what's real and what's an Aizen illusion. |
Reviewed By: Ekaterina1313 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2012 09:11 EDT
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I havent evan read the new chapter yet and im overly excited thank you thank you thank you fot updating I have been following this story for 2 years and im still watching |
Reviewed By: Lady_BlkDia07 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2011 10:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Been a long time! But glad to see this chap once more! Thank you! Also, can't wait for more Kenpachi and Rangiku! Whoo~ |
Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2011 09:01 EDT
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Ugh, sorry for taking so long to comment, my hands are kinda full of baby at the moment. ;p Anyway, I really like how you've developed this scene with Gin. Now Gin's and the Maggot Nester's role take on greater complexity and I like it. Hopefully, the next few chapters answer a few more of the plot's mysteries. Keep up the good work Orion! |
Title: Zakirya
Reviewed By: Lady_BlkDia07 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2011 11:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn! You are FIERCE! This story is FIERCE! Although, sometimes when you start with Matsumoto forgetting things, it gets confusing on where the story left off from the previous chap. Oh, wouldn't it be funny if after all that sex, Zaraki and Ran have triplets!? Lord help Soul Society for those trouble makers! And Soifon and Toshiro are so cute together! Never thought of them as a couple, now I have something to look forward to on my hunt for awesome Bleach fics! |
Title: chapter 41 dance
Reviewed By: Ekaterina1313 On: January 18, 2011 06:34 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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ok first i love this story and this pairing and i would have never thought to put these 2 together anyway plz plz plz write another chapter b4 i die of of constant waiting lol |
Reviewed By: iluvsasuke [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2011 22:39 EST
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I like the story but think there might be a little to mich sex |
Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2011 16:16 EST
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Argh, sorry for the delay. Kinda out in the middle of nowhere when you posted this. What to say, what to say? I think you entered Great Lebowski territory here especially with that impromptu dance (very nice BTW). But at the end I'm left wondering, what the hell is going on? God I hate bad guys who have hypnosis powers. |
Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2010 15:54 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Geez. The plot thickens but man following Ran's thoughts is like herding cats. I take it the drug Gin gave Ran is making her paranoid like this and the kiss Gin wants is intended to be used as leverage against Zaraki. Hmmmm, let's see how this plays out. Personally I'm hoping Zaraki busts out the Mario cap and stomps some Goombas. ;p |
Reviewed By: Ya-u On: August 16, 2010 03:49 EDT
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This is really good. At first I was questioning how well the first chapter would turn out, but you pulled it off quite nicely. I'm very excited to read more of it. =D
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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2010 15:09 EDT
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Gin in this chapter is... interesting. Even in the manga his motives seem odd. Gin is beginning to look like your typical ex that doesn't want to let go. Or the second coming of Jack Nicholson from the Shining. Anyway, where this leads to I have no idea but it certainly is exciting. Once again Orion you're leaving me on the edge of my seat!
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Reviewed By: Fatal Mars On: July 26, 2010 16:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has been one of the best bleach stories I have ever read period. You have an amazing feel for keeping the characters true to themselves as well as keeping the flow of the story smooth. I love the pairing even though I would have never thought of it in a million years. I am now going to do my best and read as much of this as I can today. Great job!
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Reviewed By: Kyon On: July 11, 2010 14:36 EDT
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Please, please, keep updating your fanfics!!!!!!! I love them and their pairings, and don't give up!
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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2010 17:45 EDT
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No matter what you say about the Maggot Nester, he certainly doesn't know when to give up does he? Anyway, more wholesome bonding between Rukia and Ran. Interesting little interaction with the lil' squirt and Chad. Makes me wonder if you got something up your sleeve. Hmmmm. Well as I always say, great job and MORE! ;)
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Reviewed By: ldymoon (nsi) On: April 28, 2010 12:02 EDT
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Girl! Girl! What can I even say! I'm all twisted up right here over Rukia, Renji, Yumichika and Byakuya! That my friend is an entirely different story within itself! lol. Again another interesting read that wants me to know more and this time about another group of folks altogether! :) Looking forward to knowing how you close their deal. I hope it ends happy. For everyone!
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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2010 15:32 EDT
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Damn. The interaction between Ran and Rukia really did it for me on this chapter. It was interesting to see Rukia's view on Byakuya impending marriage and finally Ran pushing Rukia's buttons. It was nice to see her doing it to someone other than Zaraki or Toshiro. Now what shenanigans is Zaraki up to? (oh yeah and write more Friend ;P)
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Reviewed By: frenchdiamond_1 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2010 13:10 EDT
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Good character development for Rukia. Hope it goes well with Byakuya. I'm sure Zaraki is getting into trouble one way or another... sigh. Can't wait to see the next chap.
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2010 03:41 EDT
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yeah...simple is boring so we all lve oyu for taking on the challenge...nice chapter though...hopefully it works out btwn the kuchikis and everyone else...lots of drama to fix but i loved it and cant wait for my angst...keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: ldymoon (nsi) On: March 18, 2010 01:03 EDT
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ahhh another great chapter to this story! And it would be a scary thought of her memory loss set backs!!! I hope she doesn't lose her memory again!! Anyway, I wonder what he's going to do about the info he just received and girl...I know it's a oneshot but it would be nice to get what happens with 'those two' sigh...anywho, looking forward to the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2010 21:40 EST
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Huh. It was kinda interesting to see Ran do the whole 'falling in love with a stranger' deal. I'd seen in other fics where two random characters would fall into each other's arms but this is a really cool twist on it. Plus having Ran reflect over her emotions about it really made it even better showing how in those other stories the lack of doubt of the characters' conviction they're in love despite the fact they don't really know the other character. Nice job but man the mystery continues. What's the deal with Zaraki's zan? Hmmmm...
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Reviewed By: ldymoon (nsi) On: March 02, 2010 01:54 EST
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Sorry it took so long for me to make a comment, time has been hectic, but, it was a terrific read. Matsumoto truly showing signs of her condition. One moment like this and the next moment...lol. I was told I was like that. lol. And...I love the name! Momento Mori! I think it fits him too! Til the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: frenchdiamond_1 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2010 12:55 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story!!! I like how you made seperate stories for the different pairings (love the Soi Fong and Toushiro story)!! I wonder how you can keep track though of all that's going on without us or the main characters knowing. I would be so confused or I would write everything down in a journal or something. I really liked the part where Zaraki finds out his zanpakutou's name, very cool and well done. Anyways, keep up the good work and I hope to read more soon.
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: cancerchick16 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2010 01:00 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow and can i say agian wow. so so so happy zaraki has communicated with his zan and he asks ran what to expect for som guidance love it. i shows that there is more of a basis to their relationship besides the physical. very well informed chap. looking forward to the future. as always a pleasure to read
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2010 09:34 EST
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YAYYYYY thanks for updating...nice little info session and its good to have their relationship back a little bit...cant wait for the next chapter...more angst? drama? dun dun DUN cant wait...keep it up XD
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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2010 23:02 EST
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A skull eh? Hmmm, I sense a theme here. ;) Zaraki's Zan kinda reminds me of Barragan's released form. More intriguing character development between Ran and Zaraki. I really like how you show despite the fact the relationship is imperfect, they still find the strength to continue on together. That my friend is true romance. ... Or is that bromance?
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Reviewed By: ldymoon (nsi) On: November 23, 2009 22:06 EST
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Ok can I say wow! I enjoyed reading this chapter and I don't want to give too much away just in case other readers haven't gotten this far...but...what are the chances of that!!! you know what I'm talking about! lol. Can't wait for the detailed description of what is really going on with that right there.
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Reviewed By: ldymoon (nsi) On: November 23, 2009 21:09 EST
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I am soooo sorry I didn't realize you updated on this story and now I have 3 chapters to read, so far, you have me feeling scary on this one, will she be alright?? I know she will cuz she is the main person in this story, but still, it's exciting to wonder I'm off to read the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2009 11:31 EST
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I really like the interactions between Ran and Haneko and later with Zaraki especially that little moment they had there near the end. Sometimes Ran can be too cute when she has doubts. Zaraki's comment about his Berseker personality vs Ichigo's Hollow was interesting. However if Zaraki at point dawns a cape and X-ray eyes then I'm gonna groan. ;) I'm excited, I can't wait to see what the deal is Memento Mori.
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2009 01:29 EST
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oooooo well worth the wait and I cant wait for the briefing on what Memento Mori is....so update sooooonnnnn XD
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