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| "Weakness" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: akito_sweet_insanity [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2008 13:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice. :) You're really good at making the endings fit the title.
| Title: flanneur
Reviewed By: hopelessly_demented On: May 22, 2008 09:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
A fun read but yes, there were some grammatical errors. I do appreciate the fact that you kept the dialogue as true to the original as possible. I also like the way you used simple words rather than try to impress readers with your vocabs. Perhaps you could try your hand at a longer fic? It would be interesting to see what you'd come up with. Good job so far! ^_^
| Reviewed By: Mia Skywalker [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2007 12:32 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Some typos and grammar issues, but overall a great fic. I've memorized the dialogue in that scene and you got it word for word. Good insight into Vegeta's thoughts! I don't think this is a cliched fic, but then I haven't read many Final Atonement fics either. But of the ones I've read, yours is the only one that followed everything exactly. Might have been nice to go a little further, but I understood why you did just that little vignette. It fit perfectly. No more, no less - this gave us an insight into Vegeta's mind that was just right for this scene.
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