| "Devastation" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: AngelRyodo On: June 28, 2003 00:40 CDT
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i lost my password and now i dont have aol any more so im going to put these fics under a new name soon.To be hinest i forgot about my fics long ago. |
Reviewed By: darkrider852 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2003 14:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good story child. but you need to kind of hurry of
hurry up and put the next one up because, human beings do get rest less. nice writing. good and long. any way i thought your storys were good and i wanted to know if you could look at my stories and review them. thanks again, darkrider852 |
Reviewed By: Psycho_Kittle [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2002 18:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
me likeys! write more soooooon! |
Reviewed By: super vegetto On: August 08, 2002 15:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think this is a very good fic. keep it going and upload some more. keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: dbzfreak2003 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2002 23:09 CDT
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Look man! Im not tryin to be mean or anything but if u don't like my story just don't read it ok! If some other people like it then let them so if u think some one has bad taste well your wrong! The one who has bad taste might be you b/c if u don't have anything nice to say don't say it ok!!
But i will say i have the dency to say that your fanfiction are very good and continue to write ok!
But please don't flame me ok and God bless! |
Reviewed By: Dark Prince [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2002 16:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bastard. how dare you cut it off there, write some
more soon. |
Reviewed By: Rogue13 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2002 23:16 CDT
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Yes! So glad you decided to update! I want to see them get together so much! I hope you don't delay on account of the lack of reviews. I've got a story of eight chapters and it has only gotten 17 reviews so far. A real drag but oh well. Please tell us what happens?! |
Reviewed By: Kioko On: July 09, 2002 13:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read the first part of this story on ff.net, and I was looking to see if you had an account over here and low and behold you did! ^-^
I REALLY LOVE this story, and I hope you updat soon. I have an account on ff.net (my pin name is Kioko if your wondering) but since they are haveing BIG problems I'm thinking of putting up my stories here. Although I'm not sure yet...Great story and keep up the good work!
-your fan,
Kioko (please excuse mis-spelled words. ^^;) |
Reviewed By: Dark Princess On: June 21, 2002 19:34 CDT
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3(Adding 4 to 3)...4 there 4 more reveiws now...(takes deep a breath)PLZPLZPLZPOSTMOREASAP
ok i said it and i reallyreallyreally want to read more,
~*~Dark Princess~*~ |
Reviewed By: Dark Princess On: June 21, 2002 19:31 CDT
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Reviewed By: Dark Princess On: June 21, 2002 19:31 CDT
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Reviewed By: Rogue13 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2002 16:55 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Here's a second review for ya. I want to know what happens, I really really do. What is up with MM people? Why doesn't anyone review? It's common curtessy at the least and everyone likes encouragement if they have a good idea. I hope you continue this story. I wanna know if and how Ryoko and Goku end up together. |
Reviewed By: priss On: June 11, 2002 19:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it is a very good sequel or prologue or whatever but is that it? I DID LOVE THE TOUGH ONES! but you should keep going with this, it's great! |
