| "Key to the Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 28 ] |
Title: D':
Reviewed By: SoraYuffie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2016 16:23 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
R.I.P. Key to the Heart I will miss you. You've inspired me to
write my own hentai KH story. I'm already up to chapter 8 (not
counting chapter 0) as I write this. My favorite parts are the
chapters where Sora and Yuffie have sex. I've decided to copy and
past this story in a Google document so I can read it whenever I'm
in the mood to do so. Hopefully one day maybe this story might be
resurrected. Will see...
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Reviewed By: felstone117 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2010 22:58 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
/dramatic face (with little tears) thank...you
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Title: thank you so much!
Reviewed By: Alleycat2000 On: April 26, 2010 17:12 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THANK you so much! I totally agree that there are WAY to many yoai(sp?) kingdom hearts fanfics out there. I dont mind the occasional sora/riku or some other M/M but damn it wheres the pussy?! I especially love Sora/kairi/riku sammich.....but can I find one thats good or even complete?! fuck no!!! *sighs* but thank you for contributing to the very small M/F pairing fics out there. we female het lemon lovers out there thank you! update soon!
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Title: KH2
Reviewed By: xenmosh [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2009 11:24 PDT
Comment/Review:
this is great are you gonna do one on KH2?
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Reviewed By: Vospader21 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2008 18:20 PDT
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I have a question. In the last chapter it said the end. Deos that mean this fi is over? Please don't tell me it's over not before a Sora X Kairi chap.
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Reviewed By: ??? On: June 16, 2008 11:08 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
very nice im tired of all the yaoi out there, though I do think we could use more yuri, het. is severly lacking in the KH department, keep adding more (and maybe through in a yuri or 2)
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Reviewed By: Scolder On: January 16, 2008 11:39 PST
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Huh. I think I might be offended. Aren't you making the same leaps as the yaoi fangirls do? Whether Sora is gay or not in fic has absolutely nothing to do with reality, you understand. So why don't the het fanpeople stick to their corner and the yaoi fanpeople stick to theirs and not specifically target the other. It's not that hard to not read one or the other.
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Reviewed By: badabada On: October 10, 2007 02:13 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good story...are u gunna make a sequal
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Reviewed By: Soul of the Phoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2007 10:51 PDT
Comment/Review:
This great. The only thing missing is some Aerith, Tifa (although she's from KH2 obviously), and Kairi "episodes." Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: BobmARLIN On: July 20, 2007 22:38 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I heard you plan on pairing up Riku with Maleficent and Ursula. Aren't they a little old?
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Title: PIMPIN!!!
Reviewed By: Rupert On: July 14, 2007 12:34 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay next up is Monstro... eh... probably better if you skip that one. After that is Halloween town (Sally?) or Atlantica (Ariel?). Then Comes Neverland (Probably Wendy), and Hollow Bastion (Yuffie with the way you've been writing, or perhaps one of the princesses...), and then back to Traverse town (Yuffie, though Arieth would be interesting), Then End of the world (Kairi? Maybe...). Then COM or KH2... OH!!! Try Tifa, that would be funny! I could see Sora beating her in a fight, she gets pissed of and competitive, and things hit it off from there... Ollete... Tifa/Yuffie/Aerith... Mulan... Belle... Meg... Skip Disney Castle/Timeless river (Or just put Yuffie(or Tifa!))... Elizabeth... Ariel (though that world can be skipped...)... Sally... Jasmine again (That would be funny considering this chapter and reminicent memories of that 'dream')... And Skip Lion king, cuz that is just wrong... Too much animal planet memories... Anyway good work on this chapter.
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Reviewed By: Kaze13 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2007 20:33 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
pleases for the love of god update soon and save me from the yaoi!
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Reviewed By: Fireleon On: June 20, 2007 16:44 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ho Ha! this is a VERY decent divergance from the usual menu. Yaoi, Yaoi, Yaoi and oh!...More Yaoi. I'll be checking back, you can bet on that. Now let's see...Traverse Town, Wonderland, Olympus Colliseum, Agrabah...So the next would be Monstro, or if you decide to skip it (Technicaly it's not even a world, and its only inhabitants are Pinoccio and Gepetto so It probably wouldn't be worth the effort...) the next one would be...Atlantica. Oooh..wonder how you'll handle THAT. And I wonder, do you happen to have Kairi listed among Sora's..ehem...Partners?
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Title: FINALLY. Something tasteful.
Reviewed By: KTS On: June 19, 2007 21:45 PDT
Comment/Review:
You are the man. That's all I gotta say.
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Reviewed By: donkeykong4 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2007 02:50 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i waited so long to see whos next now i cant wait to find out wat happens next
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Reviewed By: Secretly Speaking On: June 13, 2007 00:28 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazingly written i enjoyed reading your fics! you left me wanting more and so as with everybody else. dont leave us hanging keep it up. I would highly in enjoy you making a fic with jasmine and sora it would be an entertaining read. please create more stories soon!
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Title: Woah...
Reviewed By: To Lazy to put down On: May 21, 2007 14:23 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this is nicely done. If you decide to do one with Tifa or even Areith that would be funny, especially considering Cloud's reaction (Although with Tifa it would be tricky since she only comes in KH2... still there aren't many Tifa/Sora stories out there...) Anyway interesting choice on the coupleings, and I support you wholeheartedly. There should be a much easier way to filter all the Yaoi stories from those who don't want to read them (Whenever I put in W/O Yaoi, or even Shonen-ai, I STILL find some). Keep writing these, though ranchy, they still are pretty well done all things considered, and you haven't fallen into many of the traps Hentai writers usually fall in. Good luck with this!
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Reviewed By: ?W Eirdo On: May 14, 2007 00:51 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally, someone has gotten the idea to write a world spanning KH hentai fic WITHOUT an yaoi. Great work so far, I especially am looking forward to the next chapter where Jasmine can give Sora his reward, if you know what I mean. Wink wink.
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Reviewed By: jetset6 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2007 14:48 PDT
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awsome. simply awsome.
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Reviewed By: Shadow of Roxas On: May 02, 2007 18:58 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Jeez... that's just great! You caught the characters' personalities perfectly! (And it helps that it's actually a HETERO paring for KH. Not that I mind Yaoi, but jeez... there's just so much of it...) Please write more chapters with Sora and Yuffie. They're the best two so far, and I have a feeling that they'll keep on being the best...
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Reviewed By: donkeykong4 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2007 21:44 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yes i enjoyed it, good work, i wonder wats going to happen next to sora? cant wait for the next chapter
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Reviewed By: AlphaBeta On: April 11, 2007 18:15 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again you have outdone yourselves with a great chapter.
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Reviewed By: donkeykong4 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2007 14:11 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
preety good dude when the next chapter coming??
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Reviewed By: AquaBlaze On: March 30, 2007 14:01 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Completely awesome. Like you, I have nothing against Homosexuals, but it becomes a problem when 9/10 of the fanfics are Yaoi, and most badly written at that... Muhaha, gotta love picturing Kairi's reaction when she learns of Sora's 'activities'.
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Reviewed By: Nurse_Rogue On: March 27, 2007 19:10 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like the concept of this fic (or series, rather). The writing's well done and you managed to keep the characters at their age, which really adds to the enjoyment, as the reader is actually able to imagine the characters as they're portrayed in the movies/games. A fun read!
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Reviewed By: Victor227 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2007 07:06 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep it up, while I may not neccessarily mind what fangirls have put up, your work is infinitely more readable, as it does not force me to lose the contents of my stomach.
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Reviewed By: Digisenshi On: March 26, 2007 20:37 PDT
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Thank God, someone finally says wats needed to be said. i mean come on i think its pretty obvious that sora is not gay. Wanting to go after his friend through all thoughs worlds is not love its really close friendship that doesn't exist in the world today. also after that rant i must include. DIE ALL YOU YAOI FANGIRLS DIE DIE
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Reviewed By: AlphaBeta On: March 25, 2007 20:15 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay for non-yaoi Kingdom Hearts hentai :)!
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