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Reviewed By: Typo_Goblin [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2009 02:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story. It's been a while since you've updated so I'm guessing you're taking quite a break from this, if you haven't given it up altogether. I would love to read more if you ever update again and would be looking forward to it. Thanks for the great work!
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Reviewed By: Deadberserker [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2008 00:35 CDT
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Awesome story, kinda odd with all the flashbacks but very good. I'm interested to find out what Ed gave up to get through the gate. So hope you haven't abandoned this story, keep up the good work and I offer my condolences to all those hurt or killed earlier this year.
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Reviewed By: not a member On: March 28, 2008 13:57 CDT
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This fiction is so touching dude. I'm sorry for the tragedy at NIU, my prayers still remain with those who suffer. But on the subject of this story, I am touched. You have successfully exposed a gamut of emotions and character development that I haven't had the good fortune of seeing lately in typical fanfiction. I'm sorry you don't get more reviews, because this is a beautiful story. Don't let the lack of reviews get to you; there are other people who want to read your writing, which I think is wonderful. Although you may have abandoned this story by now, I will give you the benefit of the doubt that you haven't and I will wait for an update. Congratulations on obtaining your diploma!
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Reviewed By: Lysandra666 On: February 14, 2008 21:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is amazing. I'm always waiting for the next chapter and I honesty can't believe that no one else has reviewed. I'd always wondered what would have happened if Ed and Al had to go through the gate again and what it is they would have to trade. Very good. I'm waiting to find out how this develops.
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