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Reviewed By: Vagabond [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2007 17:30 CDT
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Fantastic second and first chapters! I'm glad to know that there is another author who shares some of my vies on things. My stories have yet to reflect my new views as I was younger when I wrote the. XD Please do update soon! I love your ability to describe the characters' personas so very well! Please update soon! Keep it up! -Vagabond
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2007 17:02 CDT
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Awesome second chapter!!! I love it that Inuyasha is still so possessive. His thought that he wants her back at his side was perfect. Love the thought you put into their buildings and organization. Nice little fight to prove herself. And in just a few words, you conveyed a lot of emotion -- her seeing that Shippou had been through a lot in the five hundred years she had been gone. This is terrific!! I can't wait for you to post that next chapter!!
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2007 16:30 CDT
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Love the first chapter!! Excellent beginning. I think you got their conversation just right, and I liked the tidbits about the archery and weapons training classes -- that her knowing how to use a bow and arrows made him a little suspicious that she might know about her powers. Great!
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Reviewed By: animeboysrock23 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2007 15:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please continue who are u going pair kagome
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