| "The Pure Miko" Reviews/Comments [ 109 ] |
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Title: The Pure Miko
Reviewed By: Pamela Raymond On: April 28, 2007 15:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: animeboysrock23 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2007 14:39 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
plz continue
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2007 13:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice very nice I hope that you update when you can soon.
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Reviewed By: SISTERINLAW19 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2007 11:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
aww its so sweet
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2007 04:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH please update soon. I love this story will she choose one of the brother hei or kuroma.... we shall see, I am thnking hei (S)
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Reviewed By: VixenOfTheFlame(nl) On: April 05, 2007 00:22 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Ahh! I luv this story its too cute and the pairing...DA SHIT!!!! update soon.
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Reviewed By: SISTERINLAW19 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2007 12:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love it! I love it! I love it! please never ever ever stop this fic! buh bye
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Reviewed By: crystal lilith [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2007 01:12 CDT
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I enjoyed reading this chapter...I'm liking how Gome's character able to sooth, calm and entice those around her...
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Title: cactusflower
Reviewed By: Cactusflower [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2007 00:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
This story is certainly different. I happen to find this story line that I am following here is interesting. I would like to see what happens next. Keep it coming hurry though but update when you can.
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Reviewed By: I-am-madmiko-nsi On: April 01, 2007 23:35 CDT
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Hee hee hee! Nice chapter! Loved Hiei's thoughts and feelings, as well as his irritation with Yusuke. Thingds are going to be very intersting around Sess and Inu, aren't they? If Sess plans to court her, will he be asking her out soon? What about Inu? Interesting that Shippou knew of Kurama's interest in her already. That bit of news sure pissed off a couple of dogs, didn't it? I'll look forward to your next chapter!
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Reviewed By: purp1ebabe [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2007 22:54 CDT
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hmm are sess and inu gunna be jealous when they find out that kagome was hanging out with kurama... well ill be looking forward to how everything turns out. until ur next update!!
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Title: Just a review sweetheart
Reviewed By: Casus Belli On: April 01, 2007 22:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Mkay hun, here's the deal (for me at least). I love your story, I really do. You have great character develpment, and a pretty good plot. I just have one major problem that causes me to twitch. You have a bad habbit of starting off multiple sentences with the same pronoun. Try switching it up a bit. Throw in a name, or find a different way to start the sentence. It can get kinda annoying after a while. A nice way to avoid this for you would be to combine some of your sentences. You have a lot of sentences that themsleves are rather bland, especially when describing a routine or setting. For example, when describing Kagome's bathroom, it's mildly difficult to read b/c it becomes so repetitive. Try combining some of those sentences, it will make it flow better, especially when their all on the same topic, such as the shower curtain. Other than that, I really do like it, so I do hope you continue to write it. Lots of love from above chica, Casus Belli, the one and only
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Reviewed By: animeboysrock23 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2007 20:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please continue
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Reviewed By: SISTERINLAW19 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2007 02:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
Well that was interesting.....Ilike your story and I hope you continue it.And yes I know that this is a lame review.
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Reviewed By: anonymous358 On: March 31, 2007 18:21 CDT
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Just to tell you when you were describing kagome's scent you said sakura and cherry blossom, sakura means cherry blossom, sorry just had to say that. The story's really good so far, update soon please.
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