Reviewed By: Catarian On: March 26, 2007 18:15 CDT Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: Waaaaa!! It's so sad i cried my eyes out reading this please you have to make another chapter it just leaves the story hanging so i hope you make another chapter but even if you don't it's still a really good story.
Reviewed By:Kayame-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2007 20:50 CDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: ohmigawd! sooooo sad-ish, is this a one-shot or are you going to make another chapter? this is a really good start/story. I think though that you should make somethings a little clearer though for us laymen-people ;-)
