| "Yin and Yang" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Title: ... What?
Reviewed By: silver_wind_kitsue [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2007 10:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
Nice chappie... But is "Kari" Hikaru and "Haru" Kaoru? What the Hell? Clopin
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Title: Hi!!!!
Reviewed By: silver_wind_kitsue [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2007 08:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
When r u going ta update? No, im not at Mom's college reunion. The flight got canceled. Love ya (figuratively)! Clopie
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Title: BWAHAHA!!!
Reviewed By: silver_wind_kitsue [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2007 16:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE U!!!! Figuratively. WritemoreWritemoreWritemoreWritemoreWritemoreWritemoreWritemoreWritemoreWri temoreWritemoreWritemore!!!!!!!!!!! Sincerely, Clopin!!!
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Reviewed By: zigyy553 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2007 15:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
you might want to proof read it and add Naru-kun to the story!
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Reviewed By: oxoxlinaxoxo On: April 09, 2007 12:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
i loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! update NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!! or soon, but what ever, UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: darthwombat On: April 02, 2007 18:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was 9putting it mildly) AWESOME!!!!!!!!! WRITE MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE please!
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Reviewed By: oxoxlinaxoxo On: April 01, 2007 19:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
that was soooooooo cool. ive been waiting for u to update for a while more, i need more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: LOVEEEEE eet!
Reviewed By: silver_wind_kitsue [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2007 11:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!!! PLEEEESE? Me gusta mucho! again, MOREMOREMOREMOREMORE!!! Pretty PLEEEEESE? From ur friend (and worshiper of ur stories!) Clopin PS: MOREMOREMOREMOREMORE! *cough* more *cough* PPS: Didn't understand what I was saying? Then go to imthestupidestpersonintheworld.com.
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Title: Comment
Reviewed By: ElvenNinja [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2007 09:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it, at first it sound like you altered the Naruto timeline completely...but then when Itachi still killed the Uchiha clan I'm like...'Oh.' looking forward to reading more.
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Reviewed By: i worship the shadow in everyones heart On: March 30, 2007 13:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
you are amazing!!!!!! i worship you. it is my dream to meet you some day.
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Title: Yin and Yang
Reviewed By: Zelina (ur bf4l) On: March 29, 2007 10:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is the best story i read so far!!!!!!!!! chapter 3 was a little bloody, and it was a little sad when all those people died, but it was still awsome!!!!!!!
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