| "The Mysteries of Love" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Title: your story
Reviewed By: warbringer67 On: April 29, 2005 04:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i thought it was good because it didnt just have the same charecters it included mole people well i think it is reaslly good and hurry up and get the next chapter
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Reviewed By: Mayatsu-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2005 23:39 CST
Comment/Review:
Whaaaaaaa????????? WHERE'S THE REST OF IT????????????
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Reviewed By: Kya77 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2004 01:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
So far so good. What next? Are Van's dreams a warning or what? How did Jordan get there? Are Hitomi and Van going to confess their feelings and get together or what? Please please continue to write this story!!!!!!! don't stop!!
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Reviewed By: G>J> On: December 14, 2002 19:50 CST
Comment/Review:
hey i'm a little confused if ur planning on updateing or not. i haven't seen you 4 awhile Where did you go? |
Reviewed By: maybop On: November 02, 2002 21:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a cool story...but...is it over? |
Reviewed By: Squall'sScar [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2002 10:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe you stopped it there. Spelling mistakes kind of got in the way, but it's nothing spellcheck can't fix. PLEASE write the next chapter soon!!! Nice read!!! |
