| "Heartless: The Life of Thief King Bakura" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Title: Poor Bakura...
Reviewed By: Marik Ishtar's Raykazuka On: June 14, 2008 20:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That's so sad...please up-date I'd like to see what happens.
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Title: Yami Bakura Itemri
Reviewed By: Yami_Bakura_Itemri [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2007 11:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
o.o Umm.. Please continue this... X3 I was SO getting into it...
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Reviewed By: sglily [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2007 19:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love stories that delve into the humble beginnings of The Thief King in particular. And poor Bakura, the young innocent, shunned by his own father and forced to live life as a shut-in... so heartbreaking when a child is not allowed to be a child. I liked the idea of the census to determine the total members of the village. The horror Bakura knew as he saw his village slaughtered was what shaped the rest of his life. I'm really liking this story!
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2007 02:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
Good chapter. So Yugi's friends in their earlier incarnation were in the village too. Including Tea. Interesting twist. I love the story.
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2007 02:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
Good chapter. Now he's physically abused. The census was just a pretence to find out how many were in the village, so that they would make sure to kill them all. Bakura was lucky in that. He probably will feel guilty for wishing his father dead and then he gets killed.
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2007 02:32 CDT
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Poor bakura. He is being abused not physically but mentally. Just because he is different. At least his mother loves him. He is having a hard life.
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2007 02:20 CDT
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This is really great. Bakura is determined to succeed.
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