| "Finishing This Fight" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Title: pretty good
Reviewed By: Half-Jaw [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2008 17:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was a fairly good read. The grammer is what I really had a problem with which brought the enjoyment down a little. The problem was personally there was way too much swearing. I write myself and a story can be written, even a military story, without all the swearing. I noticed there was more swearing than Halos 1-3 put together. For your next chapter try leaving some out. The rest was great. The storyline was great.
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Reviewed By: digiman [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2007 12:54 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
write more soon
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Reviewed By: digiman [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2007 12:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
write more soon
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Title: i like it
Reviewed By: hawkeye1234 On: May 28, 2007 19:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its great
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