| "Oh, Mr. Sex-ed Teacher!" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
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Reviewed By: Ciiah-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2007 18:38 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah, I know I've already written a review, but I just wanted you to know... I loved the lemon! Sometimes the authors promise lemony stuff, but then they write something like "They moaned, rubbed against each other and then came." But your lemon was great! ^^ Keep up with the good work!
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Reviewed By: InuyashaNaruto [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2007 15:26 EDT
Comment/Review:
I would love to see a contiunation of this I love it not many highschool ones turn out very well or the grammar is poor but you've done a great job so I vote yes continue!!
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Reviewed By: InuyashaNaruto [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2007 09:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent I hope you do more like this!!
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Title: AWESOME!
Reviewed By: Bio Uotani [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2007 19:54 EDT
Comment/Review:
HURRY UP AND WRITE! I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENES!
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Reviewed By: Ciiah-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2007 17:07 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hell yeah! Great fic! I want lemon though. ;) Update soon!
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Reviewed By: NejixLee [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2007 03:25 EDT
Comment/Review:
w00t! Go naruto ^^ I can't wait to see more
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Reviewed By: zigyy553 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2007 22:12 EDT
Comment/Review:
How many times have I run into you InuyashaNaruto? Ahh, well forget it. I agree, this yummy.
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Reviewed By: InuyashaNaruto [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2007 21:29 EDT
Comment/Review:
OOOOO yummyy
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