| "Oh, Mr. Sex-ed Teacher!" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
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Reviewed By: kakashi remnant [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2007 02:00 EDT
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that was great smexy, riviting and among other things
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Title: good
Reviewed By: MaskOfMe [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2007 01:42 EDT
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wow each chapter just seems to be better than the last
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Reviewed By: blondebrat2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2007 16:35 EDT
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damn this is a good fic. i really look forward to reading more of it. update soon plz.
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Reviewed By: Star Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2007 05:46 EDT
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Love how you end it. I will be waiting.
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Reviewed By: Star Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2007 17:26 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great job! Can't wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: not like the movies [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2007 01:51 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Absolute love! As any another lemon lover, I appreciate your great use of SasuNaru goodness. Every chapter was great, and I love the humor you put into it, too. I can just imagine the expression on Kiba's face.. >D Good job!
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Title: beta request
Reviewed By: toaist_boy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2007 14:36 EDT
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i really couldn't tell you that i'm an expert, but i see lots of potential in your writing. I'm asking you as a fellow lemon freak, could i please assist you with writing in any way i can. If yes than please respond to me. Ttyl. and the idea is so ingenious and not to mention lemony fresh. Sour and tastey!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Ciiah-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2007 18:38 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah, I know I've already written a review, but I just wanted you to know... I loved the lemon! Sometimes the authors promise lemony stuff, but then they write something like "They moaned, rubbed against each other and then came." But your lemon was great! ^^ Keep up with the good work!
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Reviewed By: InuyashaNaruto [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2007 15:26 EDT
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I would love to see a contiunation of this I love it not many highschool ones turn out very well or the grammar is poor but you've done a great job so I vote yes continue!!
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Reviewed By: InuyashaNaruto [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2007 09:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent I hope you do more like this!!
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Title: AWESOME!
Reviewed By: Bio Uotani [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2007 19:54 EDT
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HURRY UP AND WRITE! I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENES!
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Reviewed By: Ciiah-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2007 17:07 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hell yeah! Great fic! I want lemon though. ;) Update soon!
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Reviewed By: NejixLee [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2007 03:25 EDT
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w00t! Go naruto ^^ I can't wait to see more
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Reviewed By: zigyy553 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2007 22:12 EDT
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How many times have I run into you InuyashaNaruto? Ahh, well forget it. I agree, this yummy.
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Reviewed By: InuyashaNaruto [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2007 21:29 EDT
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OOOOO yummyy
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