Reviewed By: dark inferno [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2007 18:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well as a Gohan/Videl lover and as a writer, i feel it is my duty to review. I definatly liked it, it was very original and had some interesting twists and turns. I liked the lemon and it was nice to see one that did not just focus on foreplay. Please keep up the Gohan/Videl fictions , there are so few of them and i can't bust up the number on my own. Good job.
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