| "The Birthday Series" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Goth_Lee [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2002 09:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
this was an awesome lemon!! really one of the best Yuris iv ever read!! oh please please please make a sequel!!
~Sarah (aka Lee) |
Reviewed By: Chiknhead On: June 15, 2002 17:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
Did Kari wet her pants? |
Reviewed By: digidudecool [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2002 11:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really good A-man. Except for the lemon scene. Keep going man!
Oh, I'm working on my own lemon. I don't know if peeps will like it.
CIAO! |
