| "An Altered Path" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Reviewed By: Chargos24 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2007 02:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. Naruto should hook up with Ino next, get a contract with the wolves and pheonixes, and be trained by Jiraiya.
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Reviewed By: Rokubi no Rajuu On: June 03, 2007 23:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pair Naruto and Ino, also please make the summoning contract wolves and foxes or Demon nine tialed kine ( clan members of the nine tialed fox), finally please let Naruto be trained bt the Mysterious Kyuutouryuu Guy.Also you thought of something no other person has put in Naruto having a player that can have more than one wife Great Job With That!
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Reviewed By: Wanderer of Darkness [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2007 18:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
Pair Nauto with Ino. also please make Naruto have a summoning contract with wolves and foxes
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Reviewed By: Zvohunter On: May 15, 2007 16:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hahaha, great story ;) I'm waiting for next chapter. How your story have that little number of revievs ? Geez! This story rocks!
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Reviewed By: Kai3anime [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2007 23:06 CDT
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this rocks can't wait for the next chapter
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Reviewed By: zigyy553 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2007 21:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I completely agree! It is funny when Gishin gets punched by Shinka. Are you going to include that Rekka person in Naruto's harem? Anyways, please include Hana (Kiba's sis if you can't remember) in Naruto's harem early. That would be interesting. I'm glad your updating Sounds of a New Destiny soon I'm very glad that you haven't given up on it. Also, is the harem full of the usual suspects for Naruto? If so, I'd go in this order of affection: Ino, Hana, Sakura, Rekka. I'm looking forward to the continuation of this fic.
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