| "An Altered Path" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Reviewed By: naruto rules [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2008 04:27 CST
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toads,wolves,apes,dogs,turtles,dragons,tigers,and weasels
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Reviewed By: naruto rules [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2008 02:31 CST
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the wind blade should be named makazekami(demon wind lord)and the tai chi blade tenshi yaiben(angel blade). also two ideas for yugito's teammates are a girl who makes wings out of kunai,is an expert swordsmen and can turn grass into kunai. the other teamate is a guy that uses vary powerful genjutsus and never lets anyone see any part of him. when anyone does though it is revealed that he is actually one of the surviving kaguya. he knows digital shrapnel(he shoots bones out of his fingers)dance of the seedling fern, and his own two dances bamboo dance(his spine grows out like a tail and goes underground multiplies and spears the opponent many times ) and the thorn dance(a combo of the first two dances except he uses two bone katana ,and sometimes three. the third is places in his mouth santoryou style).
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Reviewed By: naruto rules [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2008 23:28 CST
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it is early but i think he should have all thesummons except snake
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Reviewed By: naruto rules [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2008 23:27 CST
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i think it should be rekka ,mirai,and naruto. and ino,sakura,shino. sasuke , shikamaru , kiba. choji,ima,hinata. kako,oc,oc. for senseis.naruto,kiba's mom. sasuke,kakashi.hinata,inoichi. sakura,kurenai
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Reviewed By: naruto rules [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2008 22:48 CST
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better than the redux but i still like the original more. it is on my favorites
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Reviewed By: bookworm182 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2007 17:06 CDT
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Please finish the story. Out of all the Naruto fanfics I'v read I think that this is my favorite.
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2007 03:24 CDT
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Both of you stories are good but I am tired of begging you to updated ecause I doubt your going to update any of yor stories anymore so screw it so I am not going to bother looking or getting my hopes up that your going to update when I have a feeling you won`t so oh well to bad both of your stories were good
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Reviewed By: Wither [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2007 16:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool story, update soon
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2007 23:57 CDT
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COME ON AND UPDATE EITHER ONE OF YOUR STORIES it is going on alost 2 months since you updated this story and 3 to 4 months since you updated your other story they are both really good stories yes I remember you saying your cat or kitten died that was what sometime in June Iam sorry to sound like an ass but come on and updated yor stories I hate to say it but I have a feeling these stories will never get updated again and I hope that I am wrong and I hate to say it but I am hardly proven wrong when it comes to authors saying they will update when they don`t oh well please prove me wrong and actually updated
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2007 02:52 CDT
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I am sorry to rush yo but PLEASE HURRY UP AND UPDATE YOUR STORY PLEASE and yes Hinata does need some love but so you should pair her up with Naruto what I voted for and that was frst Saiyuki then Ino and then Hinata since it seem that everybody only wants to see Naruto paired up with Hinata and nobody else its like they think Naruto isn`t good enogh to be paired up with any other girl oh well PLEASE UPDATE SOON
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Reviewed By: Thunda On: June 07, 2007 16:20 CDT
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Very well done, I should say. Your chapters are long, but thought out, I approve. Now then, in regards of the two votes going on, I think that Hinata needs some love, though Ino comes in a close second. As for his contracts, I think it should be wolves and wolves alone. Having two contracts is just complicating things too much, and very confusing I would think. But that's just me. He should be trained by Jiriya, for pervertedness wins.
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2007 17:04 CDT
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So far I really really like this story I love how Naruto always gets Ginshin in trouble and how he gets back at Naruto lol and about the voting well for the first I vote-Saiyuki then Ino second vote-Wolves and Dragons Thrid vote-Mysterious Kyuutouryuu guy I love wolves and dragons oh yeah and I thought you said there be someting about Naruto`s mother I think her name oh well PLEASE UPDATE SOON or hurry up I cann`t wait to read more of this story
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Reviewed By: Wing Guardian [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2007 08:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this flick, probly because of my love of wolves and the Naruto anime. But seriously the mods you make in comparison to the original story are great! 1st Ino 2nd Wolves and Foxes (he is the container for one of the strongest fox demons) 3rd Kouten Hayate
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Reviewed By: Mystic_Rose On: June 04, 2007 04:23 CDT
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First vote-Ino Second vote-Wolves and Dragons Thrid vote-Mysterious Kyuutouryuu guy
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Reviewed By: Saric [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2007 04:11 CDT
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great story. poll one: naruto and ino poll two: wolves and dragons poll three: Jiraiya
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