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| "Released to Destroy" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] | | Pages (2): [ « ‹ 1 2 ] | Reviewed By: Lunarian-unlogged On: April 20, 2007 08:08 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why was it again that you can't get access to fanfiction.net? Heh hot cross buns strange, didnt seem like somethin he'd get on the ARC. Beware Shadow the child eater! lol, innuendo much? And now I see Tails dreams just that, *snort*, such a horny little fox he is. I can't help but laugh each time you write 'seamen', its 'semen'. Geh, if I was Tail I'd be righty pissed off at how Bunnie is bullying him, thats a tad more then teasing there. Haha that IS a truly sadist action to Sonic, refusing to race him, bravo. So Shadow helps rebuilding the machine at a higher rate then anyone else could, even after being insulted after offering to help, and Tails see's fit to give him a lecture? *Tsk Tsk* Tails, you're a right brat at the moment. Maybe it's just me, but when Tails and Shadow are alone- doesn't it seem strange for Shadow to constantly say Tails name when he talks to him? Shadow's a being of few words, he wouldn't unneccesarily add the persons name everytime. ...--- Ok I like how Shadows acting a bit more independent, not answering Tails every whim, theyre working more towards and equilibrium here which is good...--- Tails is polite enough to give ppl warning and wait for the ok before entering their homes, but they arent for him, doesnt speak well of the Mobians respect for the two tailed wonder. Heh... hahahaha, insane 6 six year old indeed, already planning to kill himself after Maria dies of old age. Definitely not a route Id take. HAHAHA I love how Shadow intimidates the bouncer at club Rouge. I'd figure iit was gonna be Ruouge you were hinting at. Not neccesarily pairing, but I love her interaction with Shadow almost all the time. The dreamsex scene... it was done well. A little experienced sounding for what sounds like Tails first wet dream, I know none of the few I've had were that detailed. And man you had him splooge like a pro which is even odder for such a young'un. So then, do you have no actual plot outline and you make it up as you go along? Thats what I do too heh, I cant plan ahead at all, it sucks. I would imagine the ending would involve defeating Eggman in some way, maybe copy off the series and have them wipe out his base only to later discover he had an even more secret hidden one. Of course GUN is gonna be a pain in the piss to Shadow, theyre never friendly to him even if he attacks in just self defense. So Tails is gonna turn his tails into WMD's. Heh his cum was so strong im surprised you don't try that as an attack... Hah lol that'd be the opening volley at eggman, Tails special attack: Kitsune splooge strike! Ahh, entertaining read, ntertaining talk.
| Reviewed By: Lunarian-unlogged-in On: April 19, 2007 10:24 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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I see you're letting us go in unlogged now, good. That was always a hassle to me since it never worked just right. What I mean by 'can't get into bunnie like that', is the whole submission/domination mindeset with leather, whips, pain and everything. In two ways, first I just don't go for that all anyway and secondly it doesnt feel like bunnies thing. Your Sh/Cr idea hmm.. Shadow the assassin has definite promise. It's just how to reconcile sweet cream into that world and/or mindeset without totally ruining her character into an OC. --Reading story now-- Hehe great motivation there Sally, 'pretend their humans' indeed. Total ownage to mechasonic? sweet.. Sonic must be stewing in his juices by now. *Grin* Ahh... Tails getting all cumfy with Shadow and Shadow finding tails so adorable he just wants to touch him... don't know why that thought doesnt freak me out but there it is. All your ideas are neat and sound just like the kinda stuff I'd try if I had the time and didnt have other series to work on... With a name like Guardian Angel, does that mean the basic plot will be ultra cold assassin Shadow by some twist of fate has to protect Cream from others and she thaws him? Cause that is beyond cliche. And if u want to communicate back/forth u can email me again, I did get it that time. ....I realize u got another chapter still, I'll get around to reading it, if not later then nextday.
| Reviewed By: Lunarian [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2007 00:26 EDT
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Hmm, can't get behind the bunnie idea personally. Doesnt appeal to me. I like Shadow showing up at the viewing and making them all feel like scum though. Showcasing his mastery of chaos control with trips to space as well. Shadows feeling less IC at parts but at least he keeps his general badassness. You seem to have random typos or freudian slips in the oddest places. The pedophile bit in particular. Eh, you seem to be just gunning for the action.
| Reviewed By: Lunarian [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2007 01:37 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
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Tré bizzare, you've turned Shadow into an almost Borg-like being. Definitely taking it into the AU area with that considering Shadow's technical know-how in the games is basically to smack the offending computer untill it works. These review spaces are annoying as well, it doesn't let me space it out at all. I like that idea, to turn someone into a transvestite... hehe. Make it Sonic, that can be part of Shadow's revenge for them stealing his memories like that. He can pimp-out Sonic the TV and ruin the princess's reputation by linking him to her with scandal. That's one of my many pet-peeves, where a character has their mind effectively raped so casually. My blood thirsts for excessive revenge for such an act! You've kept up giving general information for each scene which is good for those of us who are not heavily familiar with this universe, I'm more into the game and anime. Gotta love Shadows ultra gruff attitude towards anyone 'cept Tails, though foxxy boy shouldn't get too used to always getting his way with the black wonder, the guys gotta be himself, cant go followin Tails like a puppy. Hmm, a Shadow/Bunnie... well it would have been the first one to my knowledge. Totally understandable havin a thing' for the sonic rabbits, they're just so.... yeah. Shadow needs to do a little spring cleaning, a pre emptive strike against all those wise-asses, save himself lotta trouble in the long run.
| Reviewed By: Lunarian [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2007 01:54 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
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Hahaaha you've got quite the 'tude there. If I didn't get it, 'tough' hehehe. Regardless, I'm glad youve kept it up. It was most satisfying reading about Sonic getting that royal beatdown he so richly deserved. Imagine, attacking Shadow first, the nerve. Tails is really turning out to be a little hornball isn't he, at least his subconcious is. Putting Sally in her place as well, nicely done. Imagine her salivating at the chance of getting this 'super-weapon' on their side she tries pimping herself out hypothetically dumping Sonic. Those scenes were quite nice. Too bad you plan for (older cream) ghe ehe hehe. You should really lay off the bold text though, it made it a tad aggravatitive to read. Yup sorry.. no flame for you yet. This sites kinda sucky for reviews ya'kno.
| Reviewed By: Lunarian [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2007 17:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I never log in to this site, but I just had to review and meany you with the no members dealy... I love the pairing of Shadow/Tails, it is beyond rare and its great your writing out whats seeming a nice sized gradual story centered around that couple. So far you've not broken Shadows character, which is great since he needs to stay IC for a good fic. Personally I hope he totally kicks Sonic's ass heh heh. I've hardly read any fics centered around Knothole world, I'm just goin with the flow as you go. If you plan to write a Shadow/Cream story as well then I'm 100% behind that as well. Thats my favorite of favorites. All I can ever find are short oneshots or stories that make no sense and throw them together with no ryhme or reason. That you further plan to lemonfy these ideas... delicious.
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