| "Seducing A Hanyou" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Ancient Spirit [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2009 19:28 CST
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Work on your use of pronunciation. Other than that and some minor spelling, it's really good. I like it a lot and expect good things from you.
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Reviewed By: fluffy802005 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2007 02:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
it was a good fic. i enjoyed it. my only criticism (constructive) is that you really need to work on your punctuation and snetence structure in general. there were a lot of run on sentences in your story, and at times it made it confusing to read. i liked the story and the idea. i just ask that you work on your sentence structure, paragraph structure, and your punctuations.
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Title: awesome
Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2007 22:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful story. I enjoyed very much. Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: wtf [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2007 20:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
By proud that you wrote this because as you know, writing is not easy. Keep it up and you'll advance, if you want to.
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Reviewed By: invisblg9 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2007 13:51 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was soooo good! i swear the last chapter almost made me cry because of Kagome's pain and suffering. please update soon!
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