| "Mating Season" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: The Flaming Pheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2008 22:55 CST
Comment/Review:
this was cool. please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Dragon Rider [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2007 20:58 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i luved it and the ending was funny. 2 freakin days and they are still going at it. i would be surprised if there was a sequel to this one. but i would be happy none the less. ^_~ -mikoofdoom p.s. keep. it. up!!
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Reviewed By: D-Reaper Originalle (undercover) On: May 09, 2007 22:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
It didn't stand out from the crowd too much. However, mating season fics are always hot! I enjoy KougaXInuyasha pairings because it's interesting to see how the author will handle the inevitable power struggle. Pretty good. Spelling and grammer could be improved and you use the word nicely a little too much. Had it been a bit more descriptive, it would have felt more steamy and less rushed. Overall, the story has potential, though!
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Reviewed By: sesshys numba1 gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2007 09:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
haha loved the ending im guessing its a one shot ethier way it was great.
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