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| "Second Chance At Life" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: White Wolf of the Moon Deux [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2008 00:57 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It took me two nights starting at 11 o' clock and I finally finished it. Firstly I must say thinking about Ember being a guys was a great turn on, and Danny being with him was an amazing pair and another turn on. This story was great and I think that the message was clear. Along with the seconddary message about the heroin. So I give you a ten out of ten for giving me pleasure and pain from reading this story.
| Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2007 14:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Huh. THat I didn't expect. Ok, I liked this story a lot (and I guess it's nearly finished now, if it isn't already). Either way, this story is pretty decent. Keep writing, and let us see more of your work, ok? Later
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