| "My Sweet Valentine" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
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Reviewed By: Ai On: February 11, 2008 03:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It...was...really...good...? I don't really know, but I do know I liked it a lot! Are you going to put the next chapter up soon?
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Reviewed By: readinlots On: August 25, 2007 21:03 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is really sweet =). i love the story outline over all! and because you added the mizuki mix up about the gift there are so many things you can do with it! have Rizu (yes i know thats probably the wrong name)give sano a gift or some other guy ask her out and her be too nice to say no for the day before... their are just so many possibilities! cant wait to see what you decide to use. you really talented update this soon!
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Reviewed By: animecraz92 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2007 18:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love the story line, but like the other person said, its kind of squishy. just seperate it a bit more and it will be perfert! and plz update soon!!!
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Title: MSV
Reviewed By: 1tky On: April 22, 2007 07:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Comment/Review:
I like it but its hard to read. I kept losing my line. Squishy
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Reviewed By: lovemedoforever On: April 11, 2007 14:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
ummm...actually, if I'm not mistaken Valentine's is celebrated in Japan (girls and boys exchange chocolates/gifts just like in the US) and White Day is a month later, where you give a return gift to those who gave you a gift on Valentine's Day - or at least that's what it said in the CCS glossary
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